That was a fantastic story!
Nice job. (:

Hey, I was just checking out your old J/R fics. Loved it. Some parts even brought tears to my eyes. The way you brought them together & apart made me feel like I was on a roller coaster ride. I totally felt their emotions. Thanks for such a great read.

Aw...so sweet and adorable! The vulnerable side of Joey endearing...

Thanks for sharing!
:D

Wow! What a way to describe how Rachel's feeling grew for Joey. The show always kinda left me wondering; I mean, you don't just develop that sorta, lust, if you will, over night. Really great. I loved it, and I usually don't like Joey and Rachel fics. No, not that I have anything against them, but just like Monica, I love playing by the rules. AU's annoy me, but this was no regular AU and was exceptionally well-written! I actually kind of understood Rachel for once (I don't think very much like her and have trouble understanding where she comes from). Good job. This girl may have to write a Joey/Rachel fic... hm...

this was an awesome fan fict in my opinion keep writing

Aw, that was a really good way to end it. The last scene painted such a beautiful picture. I hope you write another story, I really liked the one about the smurfs too.

wow - i just read this story in one straight show, and i LOVED it.. definitely one of my favorites.. you write so beautifully!

Loved it. I could predict the ending since I know you were writing the story but if I didn't know you, I'd have had my doubts.

Wow, strong stuff. Good to see Ross behaving well.

Wow! This story gets better and better! Now I feel bad for Ross while still feeling bad for Joey. I like this story because it is not predictable. I have no idea who she is going to end up with and I like that. There are so many stories that I read and can predict the ending and I can't with this one. Keep up the great work!

There are [a lot of] Joey and Rachel stories out there where the reviews say the story is only good because there are so few out there they're willing to believe almost anything Joey and Rachel-related is good. However, this isn't one of those stories. This is, honestly, really good. Better than good, in fact.

It's extremely well-written - and this has one of the things that might make it [and your other story] better than Past and Present: you've invested their emotions into the relationship. While Past and Present was good, I mostly got the feeling that J-R's relationship was based, thrived purely on, and revolved around sex. Awesome job - and this coming from someone who isn't even a fan of Joey and Rachel as a couple.

Wow, that was great! You are such a talented writer, everything happens so naturally. I was relieved that they didn't get together yet, the more angst , the better. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I really enjoyed your writing style here. It could've worked as a stand-alone, but when the writing is this ggood...well you know they say there's never too much of a good thing. Keep up the excellent work!

Wow! This is an amazing fic! I love R&R together, but I didn't mind J&R and in this fic you actually have me rooting for them. I guess it is possible to love two men at once. This is such a great fic and I'll be happy no matter how you end it and no matter who you put her with because I think you made it possible for her to end up with either one. It's too bad she can't end up with both though because I hate to see people hurting the way Joey is right now.

Yeah, chapter 2 might have felt tacked on, but it's still a lot better than a lot of the fics currently out there. However, as I've said before [I think, lol], a well-written fic is still a well-written fic, regardless of the coupling - and this is one of them, since you capture Joey's emotions pretty well.

BTW, do what you want with your story, after all it's yours [although that should be obvious, lol].