Wow, this was a wonderful perspective, and it makes me very happy. Great job.

I love Asha-centric fics, and they are so rare these days. It's nice to see one, especially one with such a unique and interesting perspective. Good Work.

Very Interesting... Asha thinking about Max as if she were Logan or just caught up in Maxie's perfection on her own... Either way, interesting tidbit there. Like it. Good stuff as always! Thanks.

and you stopped it because...

c'mon u cant just leave the story as a standalone... or did u mean end as in end of chapter...

never figured asha as a lesboo interesting... like the tone of the peice... it was realistic...
her perspective is new...dont think i've ever seen it this way...

not my usual cup of tea, but interesting and well done. Looks like there is room for a continuation or sequel.

wow, i honestly didn't see that coming from asha but after thinking about it i guess she's not so bad. i liked your take on her and her situation in al of it. great work!