It was good, no doubt, but why is it rated K+?

I love your story! I love the father/daughter moments in them, heh. If there was a shooting at my school.. well, I would be scarred for life lol. But I LOVE your story! Great job!

I have to say it was the Shrine to Calvin that touched me the most.

The things they did were unforgivable, but we must remember that Jeffrey Weise, Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold were people, too.

Maybe they could have been helped...

Beautiful story. I eagerly await your next.

Ok, I haven't even read it yet, but I just had to say this. I was pretty much floored when you mentioned Red Lake. The summer after my freshman year at high school, my youth group went to Red Lake Minnesota to help repair houses on the reservation. We stayed at Red Lake High School. It was several months later when my friend at school told me that there had been a shooting at the high school. It was really strange because some of my friends knew people who were related to those who were killed. It really ** me off later on that no one seemed to really care or remember what happened at Red Lake. It was worse than the Columbine shooting, but no one really remembers it but me and my friends in youth group. It really meant a lot to see that you remembered it. Sorry if this is weird, but I had to write this.

Nice!

I only have 1 little bit of criticism for ya. Tony's last name is not Reiderman. It's Rydinger. ;)

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Great story. And a beautiful ending to. I'm glad. Incredible job.

Wow, it has almost been a year. I'm glad you updated this. I'm going to the next chapter now.

Please update! I'm hooked on to this.

i'm so jealous. ur really good at writing. i should have said this before but what an awesome first chapter!
hope u can read my fanfic. i sorta just started.

exellent fic just as a note d'you trhink the security gaurd and or the student who also helped the guard would now know enough to work out who 'The sheild' is? just a thought if u wanted to mke life harder for Violet

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! You are a MARVELOUS writer! You keep the cahracters truly in character! Keep up the GREAT work, and did I mention that you should UPDATE?

Great story!This is fully dramatic.
As for the suggestion for Violet's super name,
in a Incredibles fanfic I wrote(on paper),I named her Visappear(the combination of Violet and
disappear)

Please update soon!

Another excellent chapter. I especially liked the way Dash reacted towards the end. Eagerly awaiting more!

No, no, not "Envision"... "Invision," with an "I" at the beginning. It's a combination of "envision" and "invisible." That's how it ties in with her powers.
Anyway, great stuff, very believable, keep it up.