aw
that was cute
mustve taken alot of thinking power.
i liked how you kept mulan...mulan you know the same brave independent insightful fighter and not the damsel in distress or just somebody part of the background.
this was a very very good story:]

^_^ I'm delighted. It's so moving...!

The plot is wonderfully complex. I love to imagine the time you may have passed planning all this over. It's just great. I fear that I'm addicted...

Clever, logical, nice reading, colorful... I haven't enough vocabulary to accurately qualify this chapter.

End of chapter nine : Because a good Mulan continuation fiction *has* to posses a Mushu/SnoozingShang scene ! ^^ After all wasn't it one of the rare priceless pieces of humor in the 2nd movie...? I love you, girl !

Is it intently that Mushu gives so much informations about Mulan to Chen at the end?

I oved that :
“What do you think, Shen-Li?”
“...assumptions...”
“What are your thoughts, Shen-Li?”
“...suggestions...”
There is a great sense of rhythm in the choice of sentences. It sounds enigmatically Asian. lol

Okay... Let see what the future holds...

It was very sweet. Mulan appears to be the perfect big sister, yet it's credible and right. I may be a little sad through that Mushu doesn't seem to have a large involvement in things.

This was just so absolutely *CUTE* !! XD
I love (although I have no clue at why) Mulan keep Mushu as a secret.

I'm reading all your Mulan fics because I love them all to death! Great job!

This is fabulous. And just to go back to Misfits, I gotta say, I like your version of events better. Makes more sense. But I gotta go, cause I've got to keep reading!

sappy? It not sappy, it cool. pity there no more chapter in this story. anyway I like it.

Nicce! THis story's off the hook! GREAT JOB!

I think I know what will happen when you said that they have to tuck him in early. It's disgusting and maybe good for them. Your story was great.

very sweet story. hope to read more from u sometime soon.