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| loretta537 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abusethis is a pretty good story. |
| RaiderTKD 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseHmm... No spelling or grammer errors... Everyone was in character... Your story was perfect, needless to say, and it was beautifully written. ^^ Great job, keep it up. ^^ |
| Milk Marshmallow 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusePerfect! You framed all there emotions oh, so nicely ^^ Well DONE! |
| qwerty 2007-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh. Last night I thought: Kagura and Yuki. It should be called Kaguki or Yukagura. Also, for a long time I've thought: Momiji and Tohru. Last night I thought of calling it: MORU! Anyway, I didn't read this very carefully, and it was strange, but I didn't realize that they were related, because though Kyo and Kagura are cousins. DANGIT! Why Yuki and Kagura Work: Too bad! When we first met Kagura, and the delivery guy caught her when she crashed into a wall, Yuki was jealous!! |
| MisSs005 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAw... I really liked this! It's a bit sad, but still so good in character..! |
| Salary Dam 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseYay!I love Yuki/Kagura!! |
| Read -> 2006-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse2 thumbs up + cheesy smile. ^-^ |
| Sutefanii-Chan 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseSoo cute!! Love it! Great job! =] |
| Tally Solleni 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! I've always been a fan of YukixKagura, so I adored this story. Everyone seems to be rather in-character, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors. Good work! |
| Emerald Dreams 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was super kawaii! I absolutely loved it! I love Kagura x Yuki, they make such a cute pair. Please, make sequel or another Kagura x Yuki fic! I love your style of writing too. |
| Vitality Astral 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuseAww...This story was perfectly written!! I love it! Yuki/Kagura are too cute together! |
| Reni-Chan 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuse*Blinks*Wow!Yay for Kagura/Yuki! Aria Sohma:(My made up char.Who still harbors a crush on Yuki,even though she is in love with Haru...She really falls in love easily,first Yuki,then her adopted brother Kyo (She is a sohma by blood.Not by adoption) then Haru.Sheesh.)Aww man...*Sigh*There goes my chance. Haru:Aren't you forgetting someone?(>o |
| kori hime 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI always thought that couple would be cute. I liked how you wrote them. |
| Cerulean San 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, kawaii ^^! YAY FOR YUKIKAG! |
| Sapphire93 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this story! Krista wanted me to tell you that I'm her little sister. |