an interesting tak well done

Very deep, with a great story! I liked the images in the emotions.

You told me to read it so I did so. And I like it! I really like it! Write more songfics please :)

*sniffles* that's sad, but very well written and I love that song!Great job!

good concept. never pictured this song for a van helsing fic, but it works. My only complaint is that it needs proofreading. there are a lot of errors, and i know it can be easy to miss them when reading your own work, but you should probubly try to fix them. have a friend proofread if you need it. other than that,good job.