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SlvrSoleAlchmst1
2005-08-31 . chapter 1
KYA! *can't take the hotness* THAT LINE! Funny how it seemed to make so much sense. You wrote, "We both struggled for dominance, but in the end, it was you who ended up mounting me." That was great. I wouldn't expect Yzak to give in, but somehow you made it work. "And it was you who left me out of breath, crying out your name." Wow. *drools* Anyway, I've been hearing your name a lot in the Gundam SEED fanfic world, so I decided it was about time I checked out some of your work. Don't know what kept me so long, because now I know why you seem to be so famed. Nice job!
Nostalgic5947
2005-08-06 . chapter 1
Cuteness.
I swear, I luv ur stories.
U must write more A/Y.
Plz!!

Great fic.
Keep up the good work!

Ath/Yza rulz!!
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black
2005-04-30 . chapter 1
Aww, happy romanceness. Coudl've used a little more angst. I fel it needed a bit more developing... you kinda forgot about the animosity between them altogether.
Havok's Lost Angel
2005-04-30 . chapter 1
good job as per usual! :D keep on writing awsome stories!
vividintwilight
2005-04-29 . chapter 1
OMG so cute! -fluff! yay- yay another great ficlet! keep it up!
noone
2005-04-29 . chapter 1
Wah! YzakXAthrun! I loved it! good job! Would be very happy if you wrote more of this pairing ^_^ baibai!
Skweeshy lolz =D
2005-04-29 . chapter 1
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FLUFF. CUTE. FLUFF. CUTE. FLUFF. EVEN
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