 SlvrSoleAlchmst1 2005-08-31 . chapter 1KYA! *can't take the hotness* THAT LINE! Funny how it seemed to make so much sense. You wrote, "We both struggled for dominance, but in the end, it was you who ended up mounting me." That was great. I wouldn't expect Yzak to give in, but somehow you made it work. "And it was you who left me out of breath, crying out your name." Wow. *drools* Anyway, I've been hearing your name a lot in the Gundam SEED fanfic world, so I decided it was about time I checked out some of your work. Don't know what kept me so long, because now I know why you seem to be so famed. Nice job! |