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| priscalthum 2008-04-03 ch 4,  | abuseYay! I love. I hope you update this, but even if you never do, these were great even as oneshots on their own. |
| priscalthum 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abuseYay! Hinata! This was nice; it's nice that you mixed it up a bit. I enjoyed seeing various parts of the mission from a kunoichi perspective. In the manga, all we get is male or Naruto |
| priscalthum 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseExcellent. Nice to know Sakura knows her stuff =) |
| priscalthum 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really great beginning. I see you haven't updated in a long, long while, so this review is kind of pointless, but this is great nonetheless. |
| Goatis 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abuseThis is a very interesting series, is it completed or will you be continuing with the story line along the kunoichi perspectives like you have been? I like the realism that you've added thoughout the story and the quotes at the top are a nice touch too. This story is well written and imaginative while still retaining attention to details making it even better without detracting from the story with things that would make it unbelievable, even the grammar and sentence structure is good! |
| gyuunmaesan 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI hope you can update this story! |
| The Gum Mastah 2008-03-04 ch 4, | abuseIt's been a couple of years since you've updated this, and many of us here are waiting for the next chapter!! What happened?! This is too good a story to drop!! |
| Empatheia 2008-02-25 ch 4, | abuseIn lieu of a review reply from me, you get another review, as I tend to do. ^_^;; This is everything I've ever wanted in a Naruto fic-- a story centered around the women, with good research done and careful attention paid to detail. I love that there are no flashy chakra-battles or schmoopy romances in this-- it smacks of realism and I love it very, very much. I loved Ten-Ten's chapter, first because you brought an often-marginalized character into the spotlight on her own without resorting to pairing her with a flashier male character, and secondly because you made her engaging and strong in her own right when so often in fic she's made out to be rather useless. Thank you for the effort you put into this. It's a fantastic read and I surely hope you finish it one day. Best of luck with that writer's block. ^_^ ~Eia |
| Larie-chan 2008-01-02 ch 4, | abuseI love how this single plot is involving the female characters. Looking forward to the updates! |
| sgdkitty 2007-10-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG I WAS LIKE CRYING DURING THIS! basically...long story short. 10 year old whores TT_TT SO SAD! |
| DOEeyes 2007-10-19 ch 4, | abuseI really love your story! I'm especially fond of the way you portray the girl- not weak or helpless, but strong and independany, especially Hinata. Keeo up the good work! |
| Ahnkitomi 2007-10-14 ch 2, | abuseI love it so far. It's great; their strengths and their weaknesses, an awesome and unflinching view. Thank you! |
| Roses of Sharon 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI remember reading this before, but I don't think I reviewed this, so I'm doing this now. Its really, really good. Absolutely stunning, really! |
| iigaken 2007-07-18 ch 4, | abuseyeah! no longer are the guys gonna be sexcists. :] good story! |
| coconut.mandarin 2007-06-23 ch 4, | abuseOh you have got to complete this story!! |