Well-written, but so freakin' sad...

AW poor jackie! keep writing its awsome!

OH MY GOSH! so sweet, yet sad. Your characterisation was great...Karen was awesome! Your descriptions and EVERYTHING was awesome. The final three lines were beautiful. I love your work...poor Jack...keep writing honey :)

Story is so ockin' my emoations right now, I hate cowlip for screwing up a perfectly good show but this is some good writing still, very emoational, very Jack-ish...great