Awesome story! I love all your stories so far!! You're a great writer!!

Great story!

Totally awesome!! I loved the Rodney introspection and the humour!

aw, how sweet. Lovely scenes

Very nice.

You know, he needs to stop hitting his head, its gonna soften that huge brain of his. Cool story. Keep it up.

cool and amazing story! Excellent job

This is beautiful and touching! Thank you!

A wonderful friendship fic! :D

Well done. Especially liked the third chapter. Plenty of H/C is a good thing!!

Aw, that's neat! ^^ Great fic, I loved the first chapter. Lol, Shepard and McKay were having way too much fun with the personal shield, it was a lot of fun to read what happened before the scene with Rodney falling off the balcony. Nice job! x3

that was funny cuz mckay got hit in the head and puked like a baby and I bet he doesn't know how good a friend sheppard is cuz i know I woldn't want to go anywhere near that! It is a good story and I liked it but it wold have been better if Sheppard got hurt bad by going in the black cloud and Mcakay wold feel reel bad cuz he should have done that and can you write another one where that happens?

Ha ha ha! Mckay was sad cuz they were mean to him but he was being annoying so he deserved it a lot and maybe he should learn a little something here cuz he was a baby cuz he didn't want to open the trap thing even thou he wold be PERFECTLY SAFE and sheppard did it even thou he didn't have the thing so he got what he desrved

Ha ha ha. I liked it a lot when sheppard was hitting mcakay and banged him at the wall and I bet sheppard liked it a lot when he got to shoot mcakay I know I wold. I hope you change the story so that sheppard goes into the black cloud thing instead of mckay this time that would be kewll but maybe he wold get hurt worse cuz he wasn't wearing the thing

This was awesome.

love reading the McKay Sheppard give and take and the underlying friendship that seems to gather momentum with each page. You do the two justice. Wonderful story to read.

Miss it in this new season.

Lovely story. tons of fun to read.
Off to find more of your stories on FFN.