 Hirra-Kiro 2009-10-30 . chapter 8I liked this a lot! I'm glad I got to it when it was already complete because I understand you were slow to update. Not that it wouldn't have been worth sticking with.
I have never seen a romance done without kissing before. Because, if I'm not mistaken, Hiei didn't manage to kiss Kurama...?
But you managed to do it! I'm very impressed.
Hirra |
 Flonnie B. 2009-06-01 . chapter 8 Really Really Delitefully BRILLIANT! I LOVE the way this is written! I really do!! I think (a part from a few little lines here and there-that I PERSONALLY don't think Kurama would have said) YOU REALLY NAILED HIS CHARACTER! GREAT JOB! 100% AWESOME! I enjoyed every minute reading this (though i must say, my fav bit was the incident in front of the principals office. CLASSIC! You had me on the edge of my seat! -I love suspence stories!-)I'm really sad it's over! but, Hope this review is enough to say how pleased I am for this story! You deserve ALOT of praise for this work! Okay and with that i'm done! forgive me if i don't review further (I went to a party earlier today -boss's gettin' married- so I'm a little bit tied.) Hope to see you continue writting wonderful fics like this!!
Love A fan,
FLONNIE B. |
 Kitsune Kit 2009-01-28 . chapter 8Wow this is amazing! This is what fanfiction SHOULD be. Bravo! |
 Out-Of-Control-Authoress 2008-06-25 . chapter 8Great job, I like this fic. Wonderful, really. You're style is absolutely divine, and I love the ending! |
 Kawaii-KeKe-Chan 2007-10-07 . chapter 8Wow. My heart lightens when i read such great work like this- it makes me realise there is hope for good fan fiction!! ^.^
Your potrayal of Kurama is an interesting and amusing one. I've never seen him chracterised in this way- though it does suit him! This is also the first time i've read a fic that's potrayed a believeable version of Hiei making the first move.
Congrats on a great job!! |
 moocow33 2007-07-07 . chapter 8aw was that the end?:( i really hope not (though i must admit that last interaction especially the last two lines) definitely a fav story hope you write some more great ones like this |
 Anna Jaganshi 2007-06-06 . chapter 8You're right, the song fits with it perfectly. And Kurama got a good punch in at the end. And there was plenty of humor, what with Kurama's sarcasm and the others' antics. Very funny, and in parts sweet. I loved it. ^_^ XD But, you did very well with not putting in an excesive amount of sap and romance in there; some drama and comedy, too. It was very well written, so keep up the great work! |
 Spirit Evolution 2006-12-20 . chapter 8I really, really liked it!
I've read HieixKurama stories before, but this one seemed the most realistic- `Cause even if they seem like the likely couple, they didn't seem the type to immediately come out of the closet.
Keep up the good work.
~Spirit |
 Animejo 2006-12-18 . chapter 8You--! You tease! You horrible, horrible tease! Not even ONE little, itsy-bitsy, measly kiss?!
Fitting ending for the tone of the story, though. |
 Animejo 2006-12-18 . chapter 5I like Shizuru. No, I LOVE Shizuru! Yaoi fangirls should not have to hide what they are, godammit! *mutter, mutter* Damn the narrow-minded, prejudiced America! (Which, unfortunately, makes up the majority of my lovely country, but, hey! We've got freedom and liberty and that makes up for a little lack of civil rights, eh?)
Or maybe it's better we leash ourselves. Yaoi fangirls tend to be the rabid type... It's for the safety of the general public. |
 hpgryffin 2006-10-24 . chapter 8 One of the best H/K I've ever read. I was very entertained. Thank you so much! |
 StarDancer1234 2006-08-17 . chapter 8YAY!
It's awesome, and so funny too!! |
 Sachi 2006-05-21 . chapter 8 A punch in the face...now that is true love. ^_^ |
 Karine Dragon'sheart 2006-05-05 . chapter 8*laughs* Oh god, that last line was perfect! I can't wait to see what Hiei will do next to poor Kurama!
Laters,
KD |
 Kurama'sGirl88 2006-04-19 . chapter 8That was awesome! I waited so long for this story, and the ending was superb. I am very very happy that Hiei and Kurama got together. Yay fun, as my best friend would say. Thanks for such a wonderful story! Keep writing! |