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Wolfy101
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat one!! I loved how you got inside his head, wrote in a convincing way. Awesome ending paragraph!
Wolfy the Ironic Ninja
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseExcellent story. I have just seen the movie, and I absolutely loved it. Nice joke on the perfect cousin Mary Sue *snorts w/laughter*. That's just classic. But still, good job on this. It was fun to read.
KittyLawnmower
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseFxing amazing writing. That was really, really great. :']
lovova
2007-06-16
ch 1,
abuseCute. Very sweet, very Sam ;)
piratingelvenpyro
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseAw! I love Sam. You got inside his head really well.
Black Lumina Enchantress
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseMy God, that was beautiful. Snaps for you, I loved it! And I adore the reference to the trees, I love trees, they're so beautiful, and so much fun to climb, too! lol. But really, I loved it, it was lovely.
momentumm
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abuseAw... That's so sweet.

I love it!
Rosie Real
2005-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI do not know if my first review got put up because (well I really do not know why...) I think it annoned me... VanillaFluffy if you could explain... *confused look* I just wanted to say it was GREAT! Very cute! You make me inspired to write of Sam! *admirable starry eyed stare* Maybe you could read mine sometime... I would be honour! *same starry eyed look* gracias mi amiga! luv Rosa
Rosie Real
2005-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is SUCH a cute story! Sam is one of my favourite characters! I love the ending... (he wondered if she climbed trees too...) VEry sweet ^_^ I have also read Writer's Perogative and it have to be the story best of all fanfiction! -Rosa
CMP12
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was adorable and it gave you a bit of a history that is fun to learn about! Sam is too cute! (You captured his personality perfectly.)
Kerttu
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseThis was plain lovely. And gave me such an urge to go and re-acquint myself with the big chestnut I have in my back garden... Caught couple of typos as well...
Blythe Flynn
2005-05-13
ch 1,
abuseYes! Finally I have found someone who understands, appreciates and LOVES "Benny and Joon!"...Sam is the best character, though, and not just because he was played by Johnny Depp, but because he was well written, well acted and just pulled off in perfection. You consistently keep that style of character involved in your fiction as well, so be encouraged! You are an amazing writer! It would be great if you could check out some of my stuff sometime, I would really appreciate it.
AbbieNormal182
2005-05-04
ch 1,
abuseHey! I like it.. I especially like the part about the El Camino (the truck was fooling around with a station wagon), because that's exactly what it looks like, you're right.

-Abbie-
Dawnie-7
2005-04-29
ch 1,
abuse:)

I love it when you do the laid back, easy going stuff like this. Makes me wish it was a raining sunday morning as oppose to a hot friday afetrnoon.

"Charlie Brown's Christmas tree had obviously been drawn by somebody who hated trees, because there was no such thing as an ugly tree."

Never thought of it like that, very good point.

Again, love how you get into Sam's head like that and give him, not only a past, but a believable one at that. Good work cheif.
I Write Tragedies
2005-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI was admittedly a bit disappointed in this fic because it wasn't as creatively told/inspired as the Marry Sue and Wonka fics. I'll try not to compare it too much though but it's a bit difficult because they ... Oh bother!

I thought that the ending could have been better. Like Sam could have said that she looked like what he might've been looking for or something. The ending just seemed flat.

Not your best work but okay.
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