A great story. Very good.

Wow, that's interesting... Different from what I expected, but good... But that's something interesting to imagine, Greg (or so I'm assuming, from your discription...) shooting someone... I would've said the thing about Sara, but I've seen her dying in a few different ways in assorted fics, as well as my own mind, even more since that last episode... But it's a cool fic, going into the mind of the killer... I kinda felt bad for the guy, actually.

I really enjoyed reading this, it was different and really interesting...almost feel bad for the guy...

Jenny

Cool. I like the POV of the killer thing. V. creative. Kinda wish he'd shot Sophia rather than Sara though. Good work.

This is so good. Incerdibly well written and you can feel the suspense building up...I've always loved an outsider's POV and yours is one of the best I've ever come across. I know you said this was a one-shot but please could you give us a follow-up?I NEED to know if Sara makes it through and I think that exploring Greg's feeling after having to kill a man would make for a good angsty fic. Not to mention the fact that this ordeal could be a good wakeup call for Grissom and move GSR forward.

Wow! This was really intense. I was sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for Grissom to find him, and then waiting for Sara to find him.

I can't believe he shot Sara! And I can't believe you left us hanging this way. I want to know if Sara makes it. I know Greg is traumatized for life. And poor Grissom.

You've got to follow this up! Very good.

Hi I hope there's more chapters coming because I have to know if Sara is going to make it. Great story but please continue it!

Greg...shot someone...i didn't think that was possible...HE SHOT SARA! No wonder Greg shot him...lol POST SOON! this better not be a one shot! I need to know what happened and if Sara is ok! CANT WAIT TILL YA POST!