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HannahSakura.Pinoy 1/5/08 . chapter 1
Very nice! -
Le Pecore Nere 6/9/07 . chapter 1
Well, you're doing great with it, uh-oh, what've they gotten themselves into XD keep it up, short chapter DX I hope all of them aren't so short XD UPDATE SOON
Friendlyfangirl 12/25/06 . chapter 1
That's a sweet friendship fic!Be proud of it!LOL I really like

Seifer and Rinoa fics even if it's just really short,friendship

ones!Naturally when you've written as many fics as you have you

know these characters,well LOL.You definetly don't have writers

block:)My,I could learn from you.MERRY CHRISTMAS!LOL, but don't

over work yourself LOL...four LOLs in one review LOL(five)yes I

am very gigaly.God Bless!

-write on
Rini-magic 8/7/05 . chapter 1
Short. Sweet. and to the point. good job
ynmy 5/13/05 . chapter 1
haha, very cute...
angelicsnape 5/2/05 . chapter 1
Told you I'd come over to review it (though the same name I use on lj was taken, so...)

First, it's not too long. if anything it's too short. *laugh* If possible, since Rinoa is the VPC, it would be nice to have jsut a bit more of her feelings and reactions in addition to her observations. It's a good base though, a very good base.
anon 5/2/05 . chapter 1
too long; didn't read
Tseng no Chibi-san 4/29/05 . chapter 1
Tee hee! KAWAII! :Huggles:
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