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| KristiexxNguyen 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI was meaning to review earlier, but wasn't working properly. Anyways...very cute fic! me likes lots! |
| Nyago 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWow that is some deep and tense up Anna POV O_O I never read anything like this...Surely impressive! ~Nyago |
| Sakura Martinez 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseNice monologue. Keep it up! You did well in portraying Anna, that's exactly how I expected her to act, though some of the words you used are redundant, it's still one of they best fics I've read. |
| aningme 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseTo tell you honestly, I rarely watch shaman king. But when I did, I watched the part where Yoh and his friends were about to go to the Dobie village thing. (I actually know a little about shaman king)And he talked to Anna (as in privately while walking down to somewhere... I don't remember.) And I thought they both looked good together. And now since I'm all shaman king hyped, I wanted a fic about it. And guess what? You're the first I read. It is a good story, don't worry. And I hope it will be better in the second part. Yes, I want a second part. If you have complications about this story, just e-mail me. love to help. And by the way, the sequel to this story can be Yoh's perspective. That would be cool. But then, you are the author. And it's fine if you make other stories other than this. But if you continue this, that would be great. If you live on and and make another one, that would be great too. So, a sequel or a new story, I'll be waiting. |