this is so sad...

the shortness of it, and the single dialog, it almost brings me to tears...

it's perfect

Interesting, I've only recently become an FF fan after watching advent children the movie, I stumbled across your username by accident as well. Very original!

How sweet!

I was kind of sad thinking about Reno getting old...

I really liked it!

wa so sad :( its touching

Wow. Loved the ending! So sad! I dunno 'bout anyone else but I've never really thought what it would be like wnen the characters got old, at least not further than Vincent not dying because of the Jenova cells. Great ideas and briliantly written. Keep up the good work. PS Like the name!

Nice concept, seeing a Turk die of old age as opposed to violence. And the ex-wife bit seems rather realistic with Elena.

You used spellcheck! Vast improvement there.

My only beef is with sentence structure. It's rather choppy in some areas... just doesn't flow.

Stories like this are fabulous. I suggest working more on themes like this; you have a pretty good grasp of the concepts.

Cendri

that was so beautiful very very sad.

great job.