Interesting. I like the repeated line at the end of each verse. The rhyme feels a little forced though.

OH I LOVE THIS! However. TO SEPHY:
Sephy, Cloud pwns you, I'm sorry to say. Thank you for playing and have a nice day.
Hey that wasn't a half bad rhyme!

Quite a poem you got there. You found words I would have never thought of to rhyme other words. Nice way to use repetition.

good poem!

Nice. You did a great job over there. I would love to see more of things like this.
**Tifa's Diary**

i liked it seph rocks keep on writing

Hey! This was really good. I liked it - and I normally only read Yuffie fics, but I decided to stray from happiness and find a Sephy poem. Absipositivgreatjob! If you caught any of that, I'll be surprised. Ciao!
Ray-Z

A very good poem, but also a very sad poem. I always have been on the bad guy's side. I really enjoyed this poem, keep up the awesome job! -Jazzi

I can imagine Sephiroth saying that O_O Good job!

Thank you for your kind words, Let me give you a sneak peek of Ch 5. You know that the student has gone missing, well Vincent was one of the missing student and he was found in the girls locker room the next day. so there. Oh and I love the peom about Sephiroth. Thanks

Wonder