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| Pied Flycatcher 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like the repeated line at the end of each verse. The rhyme feels a little forced though. |
| horsie890 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseOH I LOVE THIS! However. TO SEPHY: Sephy, Cloud pwns you, I'm sorry to say. Thank you for playing and have a nice day. Hey that wasn't a half bad rhyme! |
| VVSecrets 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseQuite a poem you got there. You found words I would have never thought of to rhyme other words. Nice way to use repetition. |
| sonicmilahedgie 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abusegood poem! |
| Willow Wildfire 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseNice. You did a great job over there. I would love to see more of things like this. **Tifa's Diary** |
| canibal angel 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abusei liked it seph rocks keep on writing |
| Vamptress RayZor 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseHey! This was really good. I liked it - and I normally only read Yuffie fics, but I decided to stray from happiness and find a Sephy poem. Absipositivgreatjob! If you caught any of that, I'll be surprised. Ciao! Ray-Z |
| Jazzi Strife 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseA very good poem, but also a very sad poem. I always have been on the bad guy's side. I really enjoyed this poem, keep up the awesome job! -Jazzi |
| Yumesuta 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI can imagine Sephiroth saying that O_O Good job! |
| Wonder the cat demon 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThank you for your kind words, Let me give you a sneak peek of Ch 5. You know that the student has gone missing, well Vincent was one of the missing student and he was found in the girls locker room the next day. so there. Oh and I love the peom about Sephiroth. Thanks Wonder |