Reviews for Hold the Fire - FanFiction.Net

mia rose156 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story
GoldenRat 2006-01-16 ch 1,	abuseGreat fic. I'm impressed that you didn't go the easy happy ending route.
adobo 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseah, cest la vie...i love stories without a happy ending, makes it more realistic. great fic!
Kawaii Sakuna 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseYour story is really great It would be nicer if you could break them down into chapters (it keeps the readers in suspense as they wait for new chapters)(A friend of mine always complain about books that are too long)Some part of the story could be expanded more (a longer sword fight would be nice). The ending seemed rushed. I thought IRA was funny. Are you writing a sequel? I hope you write more soon! :)
Completed Irony 2005-07-17 ch 1,	abuseGood job! I really enjoyed reading this story (and the others in this...sequence). I hope you continue with this series and your others. Thanks for the good read[s]!