xing899,

1.) Your story is not in the correct language category. It's listed in Japanese, but it's really in greek. List this under the appropriate language.

2.)You have written Lord of The Rings fanfiction. This belongs in the LotR category, not the Aldous Huxley category. Please move it to the appropriate category.

-Texty Monster

-Critics United

I had a russian friend interpret this for me. Nice job.

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