That so totally freaked me out. Good job.

I don't know what to say...

how do i write a review for such a story? it's hard! for one because it was so good (and so clearly horror)! and for two because my world is kinda frozen right now. it's hard to move and i basically have tunnel vision. i think my heart stopped for a while too. and my whole world is shaky!
that should describe some of how deeply affecting this increadably insane/wicked/awesome story is!
i'm serious too, i'm not even joking-that's the truely scary part!
i just really want to hug someone right now! i mean poor Leo having to go through all that and Ida having to live through all that!! and of course Splinter at the very end!!
grr Saki and evil twin! i want to very badly stab someone for that!!
i don't even have anything else to say but how can he say I WIN!? so insensitive...though i guess you'd have to be to do that!
wonderful story!! *claps while dizzily spinning waiting to faint*

You are so evil! But you write well! At first I thought it was Don that was having the dream..but oh yeah, he's dead. This was anything but cheesy, gave me goose bumps. I guess my curiousity was getting the better of me, I was hoping to find out what happened to Leo.

I know that his skin was the one that Shredder brought to the lair, but I mean, how Leo was "displayed" in the museum. In a prev. chap, you described how the others were displayed. I guess I'll never know (sob sob)

Great writing even though it's a bit gruesome, it didn't take much for me to get into this story. Good job!!

Hey!

Actually, I think that this was a GREAT idea...it helped to tie up loose ends and gave the conclusion a truly EERIE feel. I could SEE Splinter standing in the lair, looking at the skin, the look of horror on his face.

Astonishing. Astounding. Perfect!

I loved it. Great job on such a dark and disturbing story!

~SASSY

*Whimpers and hides under her desk* Oh, lordy, that was freaky. And very, very good. Of course, the twisted part of me wonders if Leo was still alive when they got to work on him. *Shudders*

Anyway... I read it, I loved it, and I can't wait for more!

Poor Splinter! Shredder took his sons away! Ugly blood sucking tree monkey! At any rate, this was truly an angsty and gory ride. Congratulations cause you deserve it. Got anything else up your sleeve for future works? Cause I'll be right there in line waiting to read them. Good job! Update soon please!

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(Okay, I admit, I had to re-read the entire story to remind myself of what had happened... AND BOY WAS IT WORTH IT!)

Wow... That is some fic you got there. Very graphic *Shudder* to say the least...

Interesting ending... (eayugh!)

Wouldn't Splinter have heard Shredder in the Lair? I mean, he may be OLD but he probably would have heard Shredder and co. comming into the Lair. Maybe he's a heavy sleeper...

Awesome Fic!

Oh, I like this, damn its good! This a horror story for the ages, wow, I cant express that enough...
Another chapter please.

*shudders*

What a great story! Filled with ickyness and angst- great job!

I liked the Russian (?) in here too- Do you take/speek it? It gave the fic a certain sense of authenticality.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~RD

Talk about angst! Yep, you're right, there is no hell compared to this...this isn't my usual kind of story to read, but you caught my attention...sometimes I allow someone to rattle my comfy cage, and you just did. I felt a bit sick reading this, but I'm not complaining. I am bracing myself for the rest. Great job!

Whoa.

Damn.

That pretty much blew me away. Believe me, I was picturing something pretty awful, but you pulled this chapter off with such a grotesque and horrific quality that it could almost be considered beautiful. Does that make any sense? This chapter was raw...in every aspect of the word. Take a bow, Spork. You just won my vote for best death scene.

Although we all know my little soft spot for Raphael, I have to say that Michaelangelo was the one that really struck a cord. The visual picture...*shudder* I won't ever get used to seeing skinned animals. It's like something out of a horror movie.

What a last line...okay, i'm going to quit gushing now. This is a great peice of writing, as awful as it is. Give yourself a pat on the back dearie.

Loved it, can't wait to see how your going to finish - and if Leo's going to die.

L, SASSY

*Finishes the last line of dialogue, blinks, then buries her face in her hands and wails like a banshee*

Oh, God, that was so, so sad! Awful, gory, stomach-churning and twisted on a very deep level. *Sniffles*

...Needless to say, I absolutely loved it, so right into my C2 file it goes. Brilliant work, Sporkey, and I hope to see more from you soon! ^_^

Dierdre, off to read something sappy and cheerful

Wow, this story goes to the darkest of places. I would hate to imagine just how far the brothers were tortured before they were displayed. Leo certainly is in hell. This is bold, dark and graphic writing; I applaud you and await the next chapter with baited breath.

Hey Spork! Done with finals...and god, I LOVE what you're doing with this. Honestly, I'm dying for more here. And for some odd reason, the word "taxedermy" is coming to mind...*SHUDDER*

Give me the next chapter babe, I'm positively drooling!

~SASSY