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Sora-The-Airbender
2006-05-24 . chapter 1
*GASP* So beautiful!! I love love love LOVE it! You write beautiful poetry!
Summer's End
2006-04-13 . chapter 4
very good once more! i think it could fit both sokka and katara's pov but im guessing sokka? anywho, update soon!
Summer
Summer's End
2006-04-13 . chapter 3
tell lina that summer says it is very good for someone whose only seem atla twice!
Summer
Summer's End
2006-04-13 . chapter 2
this is another capitvating poem that really shows katara's inner self. 2 things though. first "emmortals" is spelled "immortals" and second, just go back and put some spaces between some of the words. even small typos like that can take away from the poem as a whole, but its still really good!
Summer
Summer's End
2006-04-13 . chapter 1
wow its really good, i like it. poems dont have to rhyme much to really tell there story. and this one does just that. thanx for reviewing At Summer's End!
Summer
silver
2006-02-20 . chapter 1
it was beautiful i should know im a writer like yourself
Arcellant
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
Wow... I really like The Arrowhead Boy, but I think the others are good too. I'm guessing The Arrowhead Boy takes place when Aang is frozen for 100 years, but I'm only guessing.
.Lady.Meister.
2005-11-14 . chapter 1
it's not a bad suggestion... missing some of that action/adventure i want, but still, not bad.
.Lady.Meister.
2005-11-10 . chapter 4
It was great, but whose point of view was it??
.Lady.Meister.
2005-11-10 . chapter 3
Wow. Absolutely perfect. Amazing!!
.Lady.Meister.
2005-11-10 . chapter 2
Did you mean "Immortal", or did you write "emmortal" on purpose? Except for a few missing spaces between the words, I thought it was awesome, as well as "Arrowhead boy" keep up the great work!
craziegirlie4eva
2005-07-09 . chapter 4
Oh! Ah! Aw! And all the rest of those little sounds people make when they see or hear something they like. Lol. Good jobs guys. It's really great.
Sokka's Warrior (Unlogged in)
2005-06-18 . chapter 4
Silver Hawk. It is too amazing to describe in words. You are an AMAZING poet.

P.S. I am readin Autum Twighlight, PLEASE UPDATE!
amanner.
2005-06-17 . chapter 2
i love your poems. you have such a great style of writing.
Ceriadara
2005-06-16 . chapter 2
i really like them, great work!
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