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heymegalomaniacx
2008-02-19
ch 2,
abuseLove this fic so far. I'll probably be up 'til 3 am reading the entire thing. Just wanted to point out how well you keep everyone in character. I can totally see Dustin asking about the outcome of the race and Shane would definitley be the concerned do-gooder to follow her home. This is really good so far, I can't wait to read the rest!
garnetred
2005-06-20
ch 10,
abuseExcellent story. I can't wait to read 'Molly's Return'. Please write soon.
Titanium Gold
2005-06-20
ch 10,
abuse(whistles) Dang, this is one good fic - very realistic, and VERY action-packed. The romance is awesome too, never mind the fact that you kept everybody in character. Musta been hard to do.

Awesome job with this fic, Dany, and know that the sequel is awaited. (grins) Here's hoping it's as good as this fic.
SapphireRayne
2005-06-19
ch 10, anon.
abuse*Insert thunderous applause* That was so great!! It was beautifully written and conveyed the emotions perfectly. I could almost feel the emotions myself. DAMN THAT LOTHOR! Can't wait for the sequel.
CamFan4Ever
2005-06-19
ch 10,
abuse*Cries* No! Evil! Post that sequel ASAP!

Having said that, I cannot update ANYTHING until the 23rd ;-;. They took 2 of my fics off for NO GOOD REASON! So I'll be writing like crazy, and I'm forming chapter 4 of Mud as I type. I also have a ToriBlake, HunterCam fic up, not doing as well as I'd like but oh well, the idea had been bombarding me.
cmar
2005-06-19
ch 10,
abuseA wonderful last chapter - very sweet, and the separation makes perfect sense, unfortunately for Shane and Molly. I loved the goodbye at the airport, with the unspoken feelings - very, very effective. With so many fics rushing right to the bedroom, it's good to see this romance taking its time to play out more realistically.

Loved the whole story, the romance, the action, everything. Now on to the sequel!
the real vampire
2005-06-19
ch 10,
abuseOMG! Wow, that was such a good story. Cannot wait for the sequal! Hope to read it soon (hint hint! :D ) Great job! ~the real vampire~
juzblue
2005-06-19
ch 10, anon.
abusewow. great story. make sure the sequel's up soon!!
AngelMouse5
2005-06-19
ch 10,
abuseExcellent way to end the story, really good and it's nice to see a story not ending on a happy not but on a to be continued note...

Excellent chapter and great finish.
BloomingViolets
2005-06-12
ch 9,
abuseupdate update update!
garnetred
2005-06-12
ch 9,
abuseExcellent story. I can't wait to see what happens between Shane and Molly. Please update soon.
cmar
2005-06-10
ch 9,
abuseThat was very, very well done. You're about the only person I know who can write a zord battle and make it convincing. Also I really liked the way you had all the Rangers and Molly contribute their own specialty to the effort, the teamwork was very much in the Power Rangers spirit.

(Also loved the additional little Cam/Hunter moment...)

So the battle is over, but the war continues... and of course Shane and Molly have unfinished business.
AngelMouse5
2005-06-10
ch 9,
abuseExcellent chapter my friend. Love the bit at the end with the Bradley brothers blowing the you know what out of Lothor... didn't show me that bit! LOL

Really loving this, can't wait for the next chapter.
the real vampire
2005-06-10
ch 9,
abuseOMG! Brilliant chapter. You almost gave me a heart attack when Hunter was blown up!! Loved the whole ninja power thing, especially Blake and Hunters (but then I do like them!) Hee hee. Update soon please!
juzblue
2005-06-09
ch 9,
abuseWow great chapter man!!
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