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randomgirl2k8
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
please update! I love this story!
alex
2009-11-24 . chapter 19
I just checked your story after a year. You still haven't updated.no. Please update your work is so good.
BringTheNight
2009-11-19 . chapter 19
"And YES! To all of you fans out there. I will be finishing this story. I won’t let it die, I swear."

*sniff sniff*
Inkling
2009-11-05 . chapter 19
Just had to add one more thing: THANK YOU for not dismissing Peter! Most of these kind of fics that I've read either brush him off as cruel comic relief, write him as a traitor, or ignore him completely. I'm so glad I've found someone who realises how important he is to the whole HP story!

Ok, that's it now. Sorry for the excessive reviews, but I always think of more things to say afterwards, and have to come back... Please write more? x
Inkling
2009-11-05 . chapter 17
This whole chapter was WONDERFULLY written.
Inkling
2009-11-05 . chapter 19
This is an astoundingly excellent story! It's been an absolute thrill to read. You've taken a couple of familiar plot lines and twisted and renewed them to make this a brilliantly original fanfiction.

Btw, did I notice some subtle hints of Pirates of the Caribbean in there? Or was that just my over-obsessed mind playing tricks on me...
Tabby_Kate
2009-10-10 . chapter 19
Every single time I reread this story I get completely entralled. I copy quotes for my friends, I draw crappy pictures of the characters, I reread my fave chapters. and every tie I get to chapter 19 and I' like UPDATE GOSH DARN IT! or at least put us out of our isery and Abandon the story, please!

Oh, I just had a horrible thought... what if you're dead, and thats why you havn't posted.

Please don't be dead, cause I would hate for you to have died and I really need to know where this story is going, like desperatly!

Also... is Snape gunna love her, cause thats all kinds of cliche and awkward, she shouldn't just be a replacement Lily, its not cool that way.
HermioneGranger474
2009-10-03 . chapter 19
do a sequel pleasee!
Mlle.D.Haze
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
Well I've very much enjoyed your story, so can you tell me if it's abandoned or if we can expect an update ? Please ? ^^
HiddenDepths
2009-09-07 . chapter 7
I know I'm nowhere close to caught up with the story and how it's going, but something that's bothering me while I'm reading this right now is:

How can Hermione expect to just go back "home" when Harry may no longer exist in her own time? If James is no longer interested in Lily, then they won't get together later right? No more Harry...so now maybe Neville is the Boy Who Lived. There are so many different possible repercussions...

And what does Hermione expect to do to make the future better? I wish this were better explained thus far. The only action she has pursued so far is to break James and Lily apart. But what about Voldemort himself? Why doesn't she just go after Voldemort and let Harry's existence be? I mean, Voldemort has been defeated in her time, right --> she should know about the Horcruxes, etc.

I guess the story doesn't make all that much sense yet.
waitedring
2009-08-21 . chapter 9
its been over a year since any update but u still have this as a WIP. is that still so? or could u let us fans know if uve abandoned this.
midnightangel09
2009-08-11 . chapter 19
awe man this is so wickedly awesome i wounder what is gonna happen next man ohohohoohohoho plz update *squel* i have to know what happens next! ^_^
sara
2009-07-30 . chapter 19
this story is really good. are you going to continue writing or is it on haitus?
JillyBean09
2009-07-27 . chapter 19
Brilliant!! This is so wonderful. Update when you can, please :D
Mina
2009-07-27 . chapter 19
I absolutely love this story, when I first started reading I couldnt stop. Hope you will finish this some day. Too bad if you didnt, may just be one of the best fanfics Ive ever read.
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