Ok, so this was written in like 2001 and it says "to be continued" and it's like 2008 now and I've been waiting like 7 years for this to be finished and it's like not done yet and i'm like getting frustrated that's it's not been like updated.

Please, Please, Please continue!

hope you right more i loved it

Exciting. I can't wait to read how Rachel will do it.

I just wanted to let you know that I loved this story. I've never read a fic told from Rachel's point of view..nor have I read a fic that has such vivid imagery. I felt like I was in a crevice of Rachel's mind bouncing her thoughts off of mine and vice versa. WONDERFUL!

it sucks

how long are you gonna wait to update! u soooooooooo need to finish this!

Ahh! I love this! I'm a huge Java Junkie, so of course, the L/L action to come is quite exciting! I think it's great that you're doing this from Rachel's point of view, because of her past history with Luke, and how she really doesn't know Lorelai, but she thinks that she likes Luke too...does that sentence make sense? Anyway, it's really well written and just the way I think Rachel thinks. I like the part where she's like: Consider the fact also, that Lorelai trusted him with Rory so much. She could've been just another woman, going out with many men, trying to find Mr. Right, hoping that Rory would accept the guy, and that things would turn out right in the end. She could've done that. But she was Lorelai Gilmore. She wasn't any other woman. Her and Rory spent so much time in the diner, eventually, Luke became more of a father figure than Rory's biological father ever did. Rory was ready to accept Luke, I felt.

please continue! this is the freshest luke and lorelai fic i've ever seen; everything's original and awesome! i love it! you're an awesome author and don't take too long. i'm holding my breath.

luce

Great story, PLEASE continue!

I like your story. I hope this happens for real on the show. I love Luke and Lorelai together! Can't wait to read the continuing story.

this is cute i cant wait to read about what happens next!

i can't wait to read the rest of it! i always wanted luke and lorelai to get together.

I love this story! Please continue it!

What a unique approach to the Luke/Lorelai trials and tribulations! I really enjoyed this part and can't wait to see more. I wanted to hate Rachel right from the start when she first appeared on the show. You've made her very likeable and now I'm rooting for her to succeed. :) Great job. Thanks for sharing with us L/L fans.