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HungryPaperweight
2008-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuse-"I love you so much it hurts!" What Mary Sue didn't realize was that a rabid weasel was biting its bottom.
-"Oh, Picard!" cried Mary Sue, still blatantly ignoring the fact that his name was Piers.
-“Actually, Mary Sue,” said Alex, “Mt. Aleph is about an hour’s walk from here. I was buried under it for about a week, so I should know.”

Monochromatic hair, cool dance, and a completely original background. Mary Sue is the best character EVAH!11

Erm, sorry 'bout that. Still, that was funny, especially the double-dream. (Or triple, perhaps?) Ah, you just gotta love those Mary Sue parodies.
Anneka Neko
2008-08-22
ch 1,
abuseYou have a very rare distinction: I am literally LOLing uncontrollably right now. xD

Gah, that was brilliant! The annoyingly described Animagus cross-over Mary Sue came to life! O.O xD That bit when they buried her... from that moment on, I was laughing hard enough to hurt. Great fic.
PyroEra
2008-08-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

This is such a crack fanfic! NYAH NYAH NYAH!

And at the end, it reminded of a Spongebob Squarepants episode where Mrs Puff was having the craziest dream and then she woke up but it was still a dream and etc etc

Keep up the awesome work!
Isaac777
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseYour sick. That was funny, a hot as hell rat, pretty origional
Kiwi
2008-01-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was so hard not to laugh out loud.
While I was reading this, I could imagine more than half of this drawn in that classic shoujo manga style; complete with sparkles and dozens of roses no one asked for.
It'd be awesome if someone drew this as a comic book! Or at least I think so. X3
SandnBlood
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseI like how repetetive some of the colors were, very mary sueosh. And I like the dream sequences.
Alex teh Eval
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseDear lordie, that was funny. Any part that involved Felix was pure gold (talking about the slumber party, running away in tears)

Good stuff.
Ukime Karasu
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseGenius. Pure genius. xD Especially the parts where the Mary-Sue hair and eyes all of a sudden change colours!

Definitely a fav. :3
darth_spaul
2007-06-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseyou spin a pretty good yarn. Thanks for never making it too weird. If you make more, post on gamefaqs or something. That's where I got this link. again, thoroughly enjoyed your various writings.
tisroero
2007-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThat. Was. Awesome.

Few things make me laugh anymore, and this was one of them.
Rauxlen
2006-09-23
ch 1,
abuseIt's a neverending Mary Sue nighttmare!! o_o Poor Piers *hugs Piccy*

"Hiya, Hot stuff," said the rat.

Piers screamed.

Wonder if he'll ever wake up REALLY.
Cosmic Chaos
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseI can't believe I never reviewed this... it's one of the best Mary Sue bashings I've ever read! I just loved "Her locks were cerulean cinnabar viridian lavender fuchsia pewter vermillion celadon saffron seafoam" - brilliant.
Rike-sama
2006-08-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is SO going to my favourites.

Classic.
ShadowofUndine
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was so random; it was great! I really like how you parodied all of the stereotypical fangirl-ish ideas that I've seen about this category. The Multi-Layered Dream Ending was a nice touch, too; it somehow made me laugh even more.

Thanks for the randomness.
~Shadow of Undine
HEY
2006-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is probably one of the first "humor" fics that actually made me laugh at times. Good job.
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