“You’re one to talk. You drug me down with you!” Ken snapped back.

“I didn’t want to lay on the ground all alone.” Omi breathed.

i think you meant drag, there were more actually i just took this one coz i liked it... it held somewhat of a double meaning hahahaha...
^_^
nice plot too

...O_O Umm...didnt Nagi like die...When did he ever pic Omi to the pillar...? -.-" Im so lost. A lot of scences happened and i never seemt o have seem them...Im checking my memory and cant remember. If you know can you tell me which episode that was...?

it should be longer chu ^.^ it is fun to read make it longer please chu

*jaw is dropped* AH! SO KAWAII! SQUEE!
Sorry, I just thought that was really adorable.
You know you want to update...
I'll give you a cookie...
or...
or...
PIE!
Yes, everyone loves pie. Would you consider the pie, just to update?!

-Kira

cute...

The End? Short, rushed ending...(if it's the end) but cuteness. The plate of apples is a nice touch from the series. ^^

Kawaii chapter! xD

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

YAY!! New chappie! New chappie! *does new chapter celebration dance*

Things are really starting to heat up here! Great chapter, and I liked it that Schwartz showed up (or, at least, part of them ... I kinda miss Crawford). But, Nagi being nice - too cool! Great job. Can't wait to read more.

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

yaay finally u updated this.

meow. keep up the good work.

APPLES! ^_^ Oh, I laughed so hard when I read that. I'm still laughing.

Great chapter! The suspense just keeps building. Can't wait to read the next one.

APPLES! I'm so gonna have to put that in one of my fics, too. ^_~

*wanders off, still laughing*

Sorry to correct your spelling of some of the words but it's Kritiker and Schwarz according to my DVDs.

Anyway, this is very interesting and I really do hope you update again soon.

Aw! Plain cute! Hhehhe luved it wen they fell anyways update soon ^^