This is absolutely fabulous!

This was my first Rayne fic, also my first Firefly fic, and I just loved it. Great job!!

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story.

loved the concept
loved the story and overall evolution
Great job

Aw!! So sweet! Good story all around, loved River's 'Key'. You made River sound like River. Took a sentence and made it sound like poetry. Very good job on her character.

Aww this is so sweet I enjoyed the read!

thanks. great story. liked that you brought Jayne's family into it. and didn't make Simon a jerk.

Enjoying this story very much. I'm a bit of a stickler about spelling and punctuation, usually, but the narrative pulls me right over those speed bumps in this story. I love the detailed backstory of Jayne's life, and the whole amnesiac situation comedy you've developed. I can only believe it's going to get even better from here.

I loved it!

I know I'm supposed to say something more constructive but, not sure.

Anyway, found you on crack_van on

So I'm sure you got a lot of comments from that!

Best of luck

I really love how in this first chapter you have Jayne being able to translate River-talk. The relastionship seems very sweet and how accurate to how it would have been
Good job

wonderful beginning. this was recommended at at 'Pushing the Quill' and I'm really glad I came over to check it out!

Totally brilliant story. Loved it all

Aww,..i love it ;A;

Awe!
I simply adore this story!
I wish it was longer, or you wrote a sequel, but this is still perfectly perfect!
Thanks,
~handadeath

Loved it!