loved the concept
loved the story and overall evolution
Great job

Aw!! So sweet! Good story all around, loved River's 'Key'. You made River sound like River. Took a sentence and made it sound like poetry. Very good job on her character.

Aww this is so sweet I enjoyed the read!

thanks. great story. liked that you brought Jayne's family into it. and didn't make Simon a jerk.

Enjoying this story very much. I'm a bit of a stickler about spelling and punctuation, usually, but the narrative pulls me right over those speed bumps in this story. I love the detailed backstory of Jayne's life, and the whole amnesiac situation comedy you've developed. I can only believe it's going to get even better from here.

I loved it!

I know I'm supposed to say something more constructive but, not sure.

Anyway, found you on crack_van on

So I'm sure you got a lot of comments from that!

Best of luck

I really love how in this first chapter you have Jayne being able to translate River-talk. The relastionship seems very sweet and how accurate to how it would have been
Good job

wonderful beginning. this was recommended at at 'Pushing the Quill' and I'm really glad I came over to check it out!

Totally brilliant story. Loved it all

Aww,..i love it ;A;

Awe!
I simply adore this story!
I wish it was longer, or you wrote a sequel, but this is still perfectly perfect!
Thanks,
~handadeath

Loved it!

this was so amazing! the ending was sp cute it put a grin on my face! I just love Jayne and River!!^^

I loved that. Also really enjoyed the explanation of how the two of them felt when they got their real memories back.

-Ellie

“Locks where in place when going into the state of oblivion, but the girl snuck up when the locks were down and induced sleep with a frying pan.”

*dies laughing*