Wow! SO cute! Short,sweet 'n' 2 da point,2!! LOL.

Beautiful. Brava, Brava!

ohh! very very sweet.

2 words...VERY SWEET!

Greetings Kimi!

I agree with Pointy Objects...you did a very good job with the direct approach. Keep up the good work, and be sure to read and review my stories also, if you have time.

May The Force Be With You! ~Your Pal, DarthRoden (aka Carl)

Usually, I don't like the "come out and say it" approach, in regards to Arnold and Helga, but in this case, it was nice. Almost like a poem. Overall, it was very well written.

-Pointy_Objects

Lol, very cute and nicely written for something so short. I wondered if it would even be worth reading when I noticed the length, but it was well worth 30 seconds of my time. I'd love to see you tackle a bigger HA story sometime.

-BC

It's like the final scene that we all expected, it´s very moving and direct.

Good Work!

aw it's a cute fic... short and simple =]

Very well done. Short and sweet, well written and to the point. Bravo.
But I want more! More I tell you! Start pumpin' out more HA! fics. Let's see what you can do!

Wow, for a first person story, its really REALLY well written. I've read some pretty horrid first person stories, and those stories last a lnog time! But yours was awesome and short. I like it a whole lot! But I think you should write more...or, write some other story as great as this one.
Oh, and if you have time, could you check out my fanfics?
Bye Bye!
Celeibi
"The Guardian of Hope Forest"

very cute...hopefully this is not a short one-shot...right?