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Congrats, mate, on a story well written! I absolutely loved it, especially the funny moments.^_^ Truth be told, I never actually thought about this pairing, but when it is put into perspective like in this story, then I absolutely must agree that they are a cute couple.^_^

I really liked your story!

i like this chapter it's a godd begin to a great story

Simply amazing story from start to finish. The action was all well played out. I am a big romantic so of course that all played well to me. I think this story first made me think what a good pairing HarryXBella could be. This is definatly one of my favorite harry potter fics. I hope that you do do more english stories because otherwise i just might have to learn german.

Your English isnt that bad. Kids I went to school with couldn't write a paragraph without missing capital letters, punctuation, or without spelling every other word wrong. Some of my college mates are the same way. Your English is perfect in comparison.

Great story, I really enjoyed the way you worked Bella into the mix. I also like the idea of Necromancy it is an often misused subject. The darkness that you put into Harry was very fitting: with him growing up in an abusive home and his friend people he trusted betraying him. I look forward to your next English story. Keep up the good work.

Cel

really really good

great story, the one problem i have with it is you never wrote the conclusion to the threat harry gave the press. i wanted to know how the charges turned out and how bad the prophet fared for lying about harry.

He should have the charm on all plates so all the DEs would be found and, hopefully, exposed.

This was great. A interesting pairing and definitely a unique storyline.

I liked this story overall.

However: I take issue with the constant "shuddering" of characters. I noticed later you branched off with "blanched" "grimace" etc. A Thesaurus will greatly help. The writing overall was decent...

Keep up the good work!

OMG OMG OMG! THIS WAS SO FREAKING GOOD! You should have a sequel for this...

nice story!
enjoyed it!

hey, im not completely finished but so far the story is kick **...i have been laughing so hard with alot of the scenes you are very creative i hope to finish soon and yeah keep writing!