That was COOL! You need some work with capitalization and grammer, but other than that, this fic ROCKS! Update soon :)

Liked the chapter. Corny needs to quit being such a baby, especially when Irma had NO control over where or who she landed on. Not like Irma purposefully fell on top of her to begin with. *rolls his eyes*

Update SOON! UPDATE SOON!

Keep it up man! You're doing GREAT! I loved the race between Uriah and Caleb. I also liked Caleb's insult when he saw Uriah, too funny.

Keep it up man! This was another great chapter! Can't wait for Chapter 4. ;) This is by far my #1 W.i.t.c.h. fanfic. As far as regular non-WillxIrma fics go, that is.

Wowzers! What a chapter. Caleb seems to be somewhat dumbfounded now. Especially considering just moments ago he saw Will get killed by the hands of one of the sentinels.

Yet another great chapter! Seems Will has amnesia now, since she doesn't recall the battle in the gym where she was killed.

This story is really good. Please continue. As they say at McDonalds...bah bah bah bah bah I'm lovin' it. (Although I hate McDonalds)

I'm REALLY enjoying this fic, don't worry about me. _ Just a shame I'm the only one who seems to be reviewing this fic. And again keep up the great/fantastic work!

Me again, guess I'm the first to review your sequel. Anyways, love the sequel so far. Keep it up! Loved what Phobos told his former associate after he was finished with the ritual about liking snakes more than spiders, that line was PRICELESS! Looking forward to chapter 5!