-falls in love- Besides the whole AF link not working and all this was an amazing story.

Well I don't know about amazing but unique at the very least.

Ok so this seems like a good spot to add a review. I have been going threw all your ff8 fanfiction slowly but shurly. so here's what I have to say. Your Zell and seifer slash is like my giggly happy pill. I love this fic to death and am beyond disapointed that it's already ended. also is there a more updated link to your adult fanfiction link? the one listed didnt work for me. I think that covers all for now. XD

What doofus said leant isn't a word?

Very nice. Glad I found this again. Started reading it on NoireSensus but it wasn't finished there. Looked here and tada here it was. Never thought of this pairing but it was really good and very hot. Kind of an ebony and ivory thing going on. A short sequel wouldn't be that bad where they both just say f-work and decide that they want to be together forever.

i love the story but it's harder then hard to find your story on AFF. where is it? my e-mails are AND Im send me link pLZ!

Your right it was rather fast but you did it well. Anyways i still love the storie keep up the good work!

Yeah, I can't really see Laguna getting too worked up about their relationship either. Update soon!

Its not to late to make Laguna a little weird over the age gap, and I defently understand where your coming from when you say laguna only knew Squall from age 17 and Squall was already commander of Garden by then anyway.

Aww.. they *are* so cute!

I love your writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the work. I do feel that the way you're going on about Laguna is good. I mean he wants Squall happy but Kiros could he Squall's dad... *thinks* MM there's that.. yay he's happy.. but the whole.. why couldn't it be with someone his age.. but I like where your going with it. keep it up!

I think you handled it well. Nice chapter.

wow i love it please continue again soon!

Aww cuteness.. I can't wait for more! Keep it up!

Hmm...is this chapter supposed to end in a lemon as well? If so, post it on please! And update soon!

That was nice. I glad things didn't get too out of hand when he told Laguna and Ellone about him and Kiros.

..omg. SO CUTE. I love your Squall and Kiros. _ *squee*