About 6 years too late, but it's still a great story and fun to read.
It's an original story and you kept it realistic.
Thanks for writing this and the sequel!

Ooooh, a sequel? Pretty please? I think that Jaelynn should still have a crush on him, but someone else should be the love interest, and mabe Decia could come back to haunt him? ?

I like that little girl! She's just like me! Yay! I'm only thirteen and still totally madly in love with Tristan as well...*Giggles insanely and stares at a picture* XP THIS WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! I. Love. It! And now I'm sad that it's over...*Cries for three days* Anyways, this was so awesome! The singular best story I have ever read on this site, actually, good job! ?

AHHH! Poor Tristy-Tils! *Huggles him* O_O This. is. SPARTA! It's epic! You, meu amigo, are AWESOME! ?

Gah! I know I said I'd review all of them, but I got so caught up in this wonderful piece of brilliance that I forgot XD This is wonderful! You've got a real talent for writing, you really do! This is wonderful! ?

I quite like this story, very well written and quite theatrical, it is. You should be very proud of yourself ? Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters, my computer's only just let me review (It's been being quite badly behaved) but from now I should be reviewing all of them ?

In this chapter I couldn't help but think "Yeah! Go Tristan!" ? I like how he keeps on being able to refuse that creepy (For lack of better word) woman, it's quite nice (I was worried at first) congrats on the great story! ?

SO i just finished this story again and I needed to tell you how amazingly well written it was. I don't think I told you how great it was, even though I've read it two or three times i was still thrilled by it. Great job.

This was a very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing! :-)

You writ him perfectly.

To do that is no small feat. Continue to write him like that, and I'll continue to read :)

I'm an idiot. I've seen your name on a lot of people's favourites lists, but never got around to reading your work - I missed out lol! Your writing is wonderful, and how brilliant to read a fic where Tristan is kept completely in character throughout. I really liked Jaelynn. She's a really likeable, three dimensional character - something that is not easy to write. Her relationship with Tristan was really believable (I haven't read the sequel yet so I don't know what will happen between them but I look forward to finding out lol). Decia was a good character too - there's nothing like having a decent villainess to hiss at is there?

Anyway, I will stop my rambling and merely say thankyou very much for a very enjoyable read.

Best wishes and happy writing,

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I LOVE STORY! Its just so good!

Hey i don't know if you remember but i reviewed all your CSI stories.. haha. I have to say this story definatly did not disappoint. It was so thrilling! I knew i said I was reading this awhile ago but things kept popping up and i was able to finish, so i had to restart. I read it all in one sitting... While watchin King Arthur. Another favourited. Can't wait to read the sequel. Good job once again D

I've just read this story from beginning to end. If I had 1/20 the character strength of Tristran, I'd still be a poor excuse for a person. A truly wonderous tome you wrote and I'm glad I found it. It will make looking at the movie again even more difficult than it already is, knowing Tris dies, having to see Germanius's face again.

Thank you for your effort and time in writing it and sharing it with us.

Excellent! This story is going right on to my Favorite Stories list!

You did an awesome job with this story. I loved the concept of what you did and I love, love, LOVE that there was an actual plot! LOL!

I must admit, that I missed the romance, but I readily agree, though you probably could have worked something in, for me, it was more believable without it. I don't think Tristan would have accepted any 'romance' with what he was going through.

Well done! Now, I'm off to start reading the sequel. *grins*

Hey, leave him alone! Wow, I like this. A very clever idea. I always knew I hated Germanius. Now, on to the rest!