O, bravo! This is really quite interesting, RoYale-sama! I do hope to see more of this! I understand the trials of trying to get chapters out whist living real life, no matter how much one wants to write said chapters, theyre never quite right, ne? I do like the way you've writen Sanzo, it seems very like him; Koumyo seems very like himself too. I havne't seen enough of hakkai yet to say much on him, but the curry thing? While awaiting his death? Very very Hakkai. Bravo! Or would it be Brava? oh well. Best of luck on the next chapters, hope to see more soon, RoYale-sama!
-J

Wow, this is awesome. *.* I like how Koumyou is alive, how Sanzo got the job there and met Hakkai...i'm kinda on the edge of my seat now. =D Anywho, good luck with this, you're doing wonderful. ^^

By the way, I'm loving this AU. Probably already reviewed the first chapter when you posted on gold_magic, but still.

You have a nice style going on, and the characterization is just neatly done. Keep up the good work, ne?

This was interesting and it had some dark spots. What really annoyed me was that you kept writing "Cho" like it was his first name. In English, his name would be said as "Gonou Cho," but most Asian countries like China and Japan would say "Cho Gonou," putting his surname first. I don't know if you intended to do that or simply did not know, but I just hope you know that. Anyway, update soon.

It's only two chapters in, but I'm really liking it. Normally, I hate 38 fics, but I think that this one really has some promise in it so I'll give it a chance. Please update soon, okay?

~Sayonara~

Yay 38! And AU too! Interesting... ^^

Me still luvs muchly. Insta-C2 ))

*applauds* An excellent start to this 38AU. Love the IC Sanzo and his interaction with Koumyou. I think this is how their father-son like relationship would have progressed.