I like the way you wrote this, but I don't think Zaphod has the attention span to worry like that...well, unless someone loaded his brain with lemons. Well done, I just have to say that Arthur should be with Fenchurch, though for some reason everyone on this site ignores her :(

Aw, poor Zaphod! Great fic though.

:O Omg, I thought this would have sucked! It's actually really good! O_o WRITE MORE, DAMMIT!!

ah! you are making me feel bad for zaphod x.x! i see the poor guy's still thinking about matters of the heart, huh? x.x! well, the vice-president does dig him (obviously and whole-heartedly as a matter of fact), but i guess zaphod wants something more...or maybe - he just wants one thing - trillian O.O!

WAH! that was sad! so good! (sniffles)

I liked this a lot and think it could also go on after that. . . maybe. . . ::cough cough:: ::hint hint::

I think Sam Rockwell did an excellent job as well! Keep up the good work!

Oh, I love it! Wow, you really have great character insight. Awesome!

Oh- it's sweet and cute! I particularly love this line:

"What's up, buttercup?" he asks nonchalantly pushing some of his long, dirty-blonde hair out of his eyes. It is a habit he has grown accustomed to. He thinks it is sexy.

Very Zaphod!

Angel.

Aww. I liked it! Zaphod's an interesting dude, I also thought he was really well portrayed in the movie( of course, I loved the whole movie). Keep up the good work; you really seem to know where you towel is.

-Osuwarii

no i refuse to belive it! Trillian and Arthur cannot love each other! Arthur loves Fenchurch! good story though. (i loved Sam Rockwell's character too)

Very nice! *hugs Zaphod* I like movie-fics (there aren't enough) and this is a great little reflection thing. Hoopy froodiness! You must really know where your towel is!
:)

Aww...True, I think Sam Rockwell made an ace Zaphod...I never imagined him as Blonde...all i've ever seen is the BBC tv series and in that he was dark... :-l nice to see someone who is a good HHGG writer that DOESN'T go slashing every possible moment...but not that there's anything wrong with that...
Anyway, C U!

Very interesting piece. The last line almost made me cry. I like that it has a poetic approach, and the rythmic style is very fun to follow.

As for the movie potrayal of Zaphod I liked him better. In the books he tends to be more grouchy, but in the movie he was more fun to follow.