haha nice.

i think you have their characters down well! lol, ana was perfect, and saki's letters sounded exactly like her! ^_^ good job!

I loved it

Hi! Great job with, I loved this :) I'm willwr1te4food from the Shadow Hearts livejournal community :P I love the idea, very original and Saki is so cool! ^_^

I read each line carefully, slowly. And dreaded each paragraph. rightfully so. I loved Saki's deviousness, her sense of humor is wonderful {hugs Saki!} and you managed to keep Ana's loudness down to a minimum... did you shoot her with tranqs or something? And then came that one sentence, "I found Yuri." and I was back to angst all over again. Wrung my heart you did. Even knowing because you warned us, it still smacked. And I dreaded all over again reading the rest of the way until finally your description put my dread to ease and instead injected it with plot bunnies! >.< darn!

And yes, big oaks from little acorns grow.

You'll regret that. Now, to go shut up Nicholas!