Just realized I never reviewed this story when I read it a few weeks ago. I too, am a sucker for that sweet suffering Adam, but I was so happy to have a more or less happy conclusion. Loved this story, it got me re-hooked on JoA fanfiction.

As always, wonderfully writted, dialog between characters couldnt have been more perfect. All of your stories really feel like real JoA scripts and I try to take my time imagining how each character reacts to the story. Love. Love. Love. Amazing job.

Hehe. Cool stuff. I love Avril and "Fall to Peices" is like, my 2nd fave song. Nice choice.

Very well done! I'm so sentimental when it comes to the cute Joan and Adam parts, and you made those perfect! I love the story, and your rich description. I'm looking forward to your next story!

i'm glad Adam's dad is going to be ok. And i love that you didn't tie it up all neat, it makes it more realistic. It was really good i hope you have another story soon.

yay for adam

Thanks, crazycrizzy, but it's not the end of the story yet. :o) I still have chapter five to post. Stay tuned.

Too bad it's the end of the story, it's the best piece of JoA fic I've read so far!

poor Joan another friend gone! But good for Adam getting a job

This is awesome! I love how you demonstrate Adam and Joan's closeness with still keeping them apart. And this storyline is something I would like to see on JoA. Hurry Back!

This is really great! The conversation between Joan and mrs.Hall moved me to tears!

poor Adam! Hurry Back

You got something rolling here, I loved this chapter just as much as the first one, can hardly wait for a third!

I could just picture this taking place, it was so well written! I would love to read its continuation!

poor adam hurry back

Obsessed714 like-ee :) do update soon! I'm lovin this story so far-you do great work!