That was pretty good, a different take on the common theme. Wow. That is very wonderful.

Some sad. Some cute. Some sweet. I liked this one. Not many people write about these two. I really think you captured it's essence in this, so go you! ^_^

That was so great!

GOD thats sad.but very well written & it deserves a pulitzer award!! =hands "until u get the pulitzer award award"= =D

Whoa. That was awsome...I mean really really awsome. You capture Kanna so well, I love it! I've always found it difficult to get inside her head. This is no doubt the best fan-poem I've read.

Very nice use of language and brackets. A nice telling of it; some of the best poetry here. Almost sounded too good for fanfiction.

Absolutely beautiful.

Wow! I like this very much. It is a good interpretation of Kanna's inner workings. Not many people can write her in a true light, but you have brilliantly.

really cool freeverse poetry ::grins:: it has a really nice flow to it.