That was nice. I don't know what episode you're talking about but it made sense. (I think that I'm one of not many who hasn't seen more than 2 CSI episodes.)

A great story. I liked the part where Greg was dancing, and the part where Gil was comforting Nick.

oh wow, that was great! awesome topic choice, great job on the actions, thoughts, and words of the characters -- all in all, lovin it!:):)

Just giving you an extra feview so I can put this story on my favorites list

Heya,

I've only recently started wathing CSI regularly, and only even more recently reading its fan fiction. I've always wondered what the aftermath might have been at the end of this episode and I think you've done an amazin job describing your rendition of it. George's expression was so heartbreaking in that scene and you've captured Nick's confusion, shakiness and self-disappointment so well. Your characterization of Grissom was very spot on, and I can literally see/hear him say and do things you've mentioned.

Kudos to you on all of your lovely well-written stories.

~Skye

This story was good (as expected from you) I too was never satisfied with the ending of "Who are you?" I think you really captured how each person would react, wonderful. Keep it up. I really enjoy reading your stories.

I enjoyed your story!

It always bugged me that there was no mention of Nick's encounter with Amy Hendler or the aftermath of the Stalker incident. Nick always gets the short end of the stick when it comes to Grissom. If he ever knew how arbitrary Grissom's choice was for the promotion he would be crushed all over again! I liked the way you dealt with this. I thought Grissom's thouht processes were dead on! And I though using Warrick as the voice of reason/conscience, as opposed to Catherine, was a nice touch. I am looking forward to the Nick-Gil piece that you are working on!

I think I'd pretty much read anything you wrote...I really enjoy your writing...and look forward to even more.

I love this story can't wait for your next one.
As always you did a perfect job with the people.

*cackles with glee* I've been watching for something new from you for a few days now, and this was wholly satisfying.

As a writer and a reader, I have a thing for picking out individual lines that really strike my fancy - your work is chock full of them. I'd quote, but uh, I'd be doing a lot of quoting.

Anyway, suffice it to say that you've again written a great piece of work, and as always, very real.

Heh, this was great, Kris. Excellent job. And I can only hope things went this way behind the scenes of the show.
But you and I know better, don't we, hon? ;)
Nicky did what he's always done: shoved the pain, shock, confusion and all the other stuff deep inside himself to hopefully never see the light of day again.
-}-@
Krys

Love it. I always wondered what happened after "Who are you".

I´m looking forward to your new story. I love reading about the Nick and his relationships with the others, especially Grissom.

Cool story ... again, Kristen! You have truly captured the characters of CSI. And your stories always leave me wanting more.

Lovely work and very in character. That was a very scary episode for Nick and I love how you depicted that through Grissom's eyes. Very nicely done.