|Reviews for Horses of Balinor|
| bluephoenix65069 9/5/09 . chapter 2
interesting. i like it so far. what happens next? :)
| iDream13 7/26/07 . chapter 2
oh way cool idea! amy's comic relief is hilarious! so funny! keep going, this is cool. and Balinor are some of my FAV books! )
| anna 2/15/06 . chapter 2
Very funny... please write more!
| RidingPeacefully 2/2/06 . chapter 1
Your story is very cleaverly done and I would love to read the next chapter.
| Eolith 9/4/05 . chapter 2
Do you mean for the horses to be real, or just comical? I suppose if you're aiming for the latter you are achieving it... One thing though, I don't think 'passaging' is a word... and when Amy 'trots' up to the post it rather confused me. I was like 'Wait... Amy's a horse?' Then I figured it out. :D
| Eolith 9/4/05 . chapter 1
It was a fairly well written piece of work, but I do have a few suggestions:
1. There were too many little comments made with the parentheses when thier contents could have easily been woven into the story.
2. The part when Frankie nudges Amy because of his mane doesn't make sense either. Horses don't have feeling in their hair, so he probably wouldn't mind it... unless she was pulling hard enough to unbalance the muscle on his neck, then it wouldn't be comfortable for him. The other thing is that in order to hold on to a horse's mane one has to be walking slightly behind the horse, letting it lead the way. If Frankie were a coward he wouldn't want to move, and he probably wouldn't respond much if Amy tried to lead him by his mane.
| amys mum 6/21/05 . chapter 1
this is a very stupid story - amy get a grip - i'm joking! Love Mum
| Emma 6/10/05 . chapter 2
A mental clinic would be in high demand for amy, but is she TOO MENTAL for the clinic to keep her there? Cool story guys :P
| Lightfoot 6/9/05 . chapter 2
Very nice. I see how this story is coming together. Keep writing!
| Avril 5/28/05 . chapter 1
This is a very funny, weird and exciting story, Well its not really that weird, i just put that to annoy Amy.
| Emma 5/12/05 . chapter 1
WOW ! that was awsome... pippa, you really know how to make a story come to life... I'm STILL waiting for next chapter...
| born2read 5/8/05 . chapter 1
kinda boring, you should add some excitement!
| chloe 5/6/05 . chapter 1
dat was an awsme stroy guyz it was real funny i loved it! lol
| Lightfoot 5/3/05 . chapter 1
No bad for a start! I can't wait for the next installment!
| VinnyRoxyFrankie 5/1/05 . chapter 1
Just incase we get no reviews...well, us, that was a great story! Keep it up and update soon! By the way you two are the coolest people ever!