this is excellent! and it begs to be continued!

cool story. i really liked it. ^_^

And? So? Therefore! I mean, that's not an ending! That's a TBC! You gotta keep going please! I mean, Sam and Jack haven't gotten together yet so the fic obviously isn't finished! *lol*

~LCTC

That was really sweet. Great job!

Nicely done, looking forward to more.