Sweet. It made smile alot.
:-)

Okay, "Knowing" was good, really good, but this? Yeahsureyoubetcha is was a-m-a-zing! Wow, fanfic usually doesn't make me cry. Usually...

This, wow, this, it took me some time to stop crying enough to write this review!

omg, that is so cute! this is a stupid comment, but i love that its chronological and simple. i loved that missing scene with daniel; it's perfect. and i totally understand that jack didnt want to see her die, but what about sam? could he stand to let her see him die? but very romantic nonetheless. and i loved the ending, with the kisses. i loved teal'c and daniel leaving...hehe. exactly what's missing from stargate season 8;)

Lol that was good i liked it keep righting
Jenn

i really liked that. it was well written and had a really nice ending. well done!

Another really good fic! Very touching. You have the characters down pat!

Aww that was so great! I'd always imagined one of them having a talk to Daniel about Alterante Timeline Sam and Jack's r/ship! That talk was great and Daniel's definition of Sam and Jack's relationship PERFECT!

That's SO- sweet. I can't think of a better synonym- fried my brain cells at 1:30am... Anyway- Moebious always confused me... Actually, it never confused me until my friend was confused and I tried to explain it to her, and then it brought up a whole bunch of questions I never thought about... Like- if the AU S/J fixed stuff in the past, our S/J wouldn't have gone back in time, right? So, did the AU S/J stay in the past, or did everything right itself once things were changed back to the way they were supposed to be? So would a scene after all of the goings-on exist? These are questions, months later, that still plague me...
Anyway- enough with my ramblings- this was a terrific story. I loved the little heart- to- heart between our Daniel and the AU Sam. Beautiful fic. :) :) :)

Very well written. I have posted a challenge to many writters and haven't gotten a reply yet. My challenge is to write a story of our Jack and Sam in ancient Egypt before they were killed and even up to how they died. I would love to see how you would write Jack telling Ra he'd go first.

That was relly sweet, I always love the Moebius stories that deal with the alternates in the past. Great Job! :)

great story. i liked it a lot. ^_^

gotta loveit!

That was terrific! Short and sweet. Love how you linked the two aswell. Great work.

chuckle. sweet

good chap!