Wow. Just... wow. This story... It's incredible! I love it! It has an AWESOME plotline, correct grammer, and incredible detail. You are an incredible writer. I'm going to go take a look at some of your other works if you have any. Please update soon!

This story just keeps getting better and better with each successive chapter. I really like your storyline, and with Kurama now having to adjust to being human, as will Hiei to having a human for a lover, you've added even more to what was already terrific to begin with, and I, for one, will hang on to each and every word until the very end.

And back with a vengeance I daresay! This was a truly awesome chapter. I loved how you worked Kurama's 'human' nature into this chapter! BRAVA!!

I loved it! Great job, and keep up the good work.

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WOW!! Every one of the chapters in this story has been well worth the wait, but this one, by far, has got to be my favorite. It's full of action and ends at just the right moment... my heart was in my throat as I read it!

heh...finally a lovey dovey scene. lol.

YAY... you're back with more of this wonderful story!! I'm so glad as I was missing it!!

As always, you've woven a deft chapter; your narrative allowing the reader to create within their own mind, the world they read on paper (or screen, in this case). Another wonderful chapter; another great job!

I've been enjoying your retelling of the "Urameshi Four". Always a Kurama/Hiei fan, like their little touches here and there. Nice to see Hiei find his sister, and actually admit it for once. Please keep writing.

Another brilliant chapter. I really like the fact that you seem to take your time with writing this story, and that time is well spent as it allows your readers to envision each and every scene they read. The 'battle' scenes depicted in this chapter were particularly well written; though I really enjoyed the scene between Hiei and Yukina. It will be interesting to see what her response to him will be. I do like the fact that in this 'universe' Hiei is not trying to hide his relationship to her. BRAVA!!

I'm so glad that you updated this story. I can't wait for more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.

I'm just happy to have another chapter! No matter how long the wait, your writing is definitely worth it!

Caught up with your story today, enjoying it very much. Interesting to see how the characters fit into this universe of yours. Having Koenma being half demon, and leader of a rebellion, so to speak, is an interesting twist. You also introduced a possible plant of Sakyo's, Risho. Of course, you could always throw in a twist that someone who disapproves of Hiei and Kurama ISN'T a bad guy. I, personally, am a constant fan of my two favorite demons being a couple. Looking forward to the next chapter.

yay kuramas gonna fight somebody!~

your story's cool, i usually don't like au stories, but this one is really good. please update often.