Reviews for CastleVania: Heir of Darkness

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Death angel chick211 2008-03-27 ch 3,	abuseNice chapter.By the way is Reinhardt a character you made up or one of the characters from the actual game`cause the dude's appearance sounds kinda familiar to me.Oh and also if I may ask how far did you get on the castlavainia on the 64?I got up to like the chain saw person than kept dying.I could never really finish the game`cause my family had to move and I kinda lost track of my favorite game.(Oops off topic)Well anyways talk to ya the next time I review.(Or if you reply which most people do) -Twirling Zakura
xemnas-is-god 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseyou are an excellent author dude. i am very impressed. but i think the name of the castle was Dracula's Castle not Castlevania. Castlevania was the name that was given to the game when it came to america.
AyameKitsune 2008-02-29 ch 6,	abuseGrins This fic is so cool! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
AyameKitsune 2007-12-06 ch 5,	abuseGrins I really love this fic. ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
AyameKitsune 2007-10-10 ch 4,	abuseYou updated!! YAY!! ^_^
wandering_warrior 2007-01-06 ch 3, anon.	abuseYES! An update!! Good chapter. Where's Carrie and Cornnell (sp?)?? Please update soon!!
Kitala 2006-12-26 ch 3,	abuseI like this so far and hope to see it continued shortly.
A Shining Armour 2006-12-16 ch 3,	abuseSorry it took me a while to review, I just haven't had the chance to as of late. Anywho, liked the chapter, I thought the action sequences were very well written. I'll admit I did start to skim at points, but for the most part I was kept captivated. Nice animosity between Draco and Reinhardt. Keeps the story alive with some flavour. I was a bit dissappointed we didn't get to see anything of Carrie or Cornell, but I'm sure it'll be in chapters to come. Nice job, keep up the good work. ~~LG
wandering_warrior 2006-12-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseyay a castlevania fic that has Carrie and the others from the N64 games! By the way good job on the chapter. I can't wait for your next update!
eternal_nemesis 2005-11-23 ch 2, anon.	abuseAnother interesting chapter...you continue to display a formidable writing style, which is nice fluent, and you don't miss a beat when you write. You've captured the essence of Castlevania so well...ie: "Dracula’s magic held a unique scent, one that several compared to burning brimstone, rotting flesh, and fresh spilled blood. It was believed to be the scent of Hell itself." Really good description. :) A few things I noticed: "Part of them, perhaps the sexist ‘macho’ parts of their minds, hoped that..." -that was stated a bit TOO obviously, and the chosen...diction seemed out of place. These words are too modern. Just something to look out for. "...creamy skin seeming to glow not from the torchlight, but from the mystical power she carried within her." -now that line, I just LOVED. I don't know why, but the...way you said it, I can just visualize her and her skin glowing with this mystical, yet powerful magic flowing through her veins. "...Cor4nell..." (Carrie says this line) -a spelling mistake...nothing big. :) "...practically raised as his own cubs along side his mate Ada..." -Wow. That line made me shudder. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of the whole CornellxAda thing. See, me and Lucky talked about it for a while when we were discussing Cornell's past for her fic...and...I guess, how their relationship is viewed and interpreted depends solely on the author. People don't really know much about his past, and anything, really, could have happened. I hope you'll provide a deeper insight on Cornell's part to help explain his "feelings" towards Ada...cuz I've never really thought about it that way, and it would be interesting to see how it all came about... Congrats on a job well done! Looking forward to the next post, ~eternal_nemesis~
eternal_nemesis 2005-11-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey--my sister recommended this fic to me, as I can't ever find many good CV fics, lol. I love your descriptions--you have quite the narrative talent. You've brought the setting alive by using appropriate dilect, and you've structured the paragraphs in such a way that the right sentences and moments are emphasized. Good job! This story has picqued (er..sp?) my interest! Well, on to the next chapter!
Kitala 2005-11-22 ch 2,	abuseThis is excellently written. The Draco thing was a bit random but hey, I trust you know what you're doing ^.-
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands 2005-11-11 ch 1,	abuseOh, quite interesting beginning...
DougS 2005-11-11 ch 2,	abuseBeautifully written. :) Please continue. I love CV64 and CV: LoD more than most and I really enjoy seeing this characters again. You capture them fabulously.
A Shining Armour 2005-11-10 ch 2,	abuseo.O Oh Lordy lordy, there's sexual tension between Cornell and Ada waves hands erradictally in front of face Oh em gee, oh em gee! Yee-ah...I think I calmed down now. That's so strange...in my fic, it's a pure brother sister...but I was talking to some other people and they agree...if you read the dialogue at the end of Legacy then yeah, it could be seen as a romantic interest. So it's not THAT strage... Lol, you're Carrie is so calm compared to mine...she's almost like Princess Zelda, all wise, and beautiful and delicate...lol, our characters are so different. Plus your Carrie has mastered her powers already...mine is still struggling with the basics. (Did you amke up the Belenades Clan thingie?) I'm glad you made Reinhardt out as some what of a buffoon with the sexist talk, that's uber cool. Even if you still make the "Heir of the Belmont Clan" (lol, I love that) somewhat noble...gr... It seems to me like you're going to hook Carrie up with someone...not saying it's bad...but I'm curious. Who? Hmm? Ooh la-la...romance is in the air. Lol, I'll stop now. I love your descriptions, they're very vivid, especially in your beginning sequence...I'm kinda confused about the people who have joined up with Reinhardt and Henry...are they good/bad? How many are there? Yeah...I'll probably figure it out eventually...

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