Aw, this was sweet. :D Great job.

Well I read the whole thing and while it had potential, I think you didn't spend enough time on the detail. Plus I found it kind of confusing why Violet would be so quick to out herself and her family as supers -- remember, their secret identity is their most precious thing! I think if you went back and made it more indepth this could be one great story.

do I hear an escapee from the local funnyfarm? I am referring to that last bit with the MWA-HAHA

I am so stupid i didn't see the chapters

Nice story. You may wish to specify when this takes place btw I am a guy age 14 turned this past December

huh. i admit it, this guy got me chuckling at some points ("jumped up and down and screamed happily"? is it just me or is that image just hilarious?), but (im sorry, i have to say it) some parts were a tad corny and/or under-developed. also, i think you could have taken it a bit farther than the track meet - even though youre going to build on it in the sequel, each story is just that - a story all its own. still, its one of your first fics, i know my first few chapters in the other side of the shadows are nothing compared to this!

What a cute story; I love the idea of Violet forming a SuperTeam. I would advise to take out some of Mia's and Splash's superpowers, it seems a bit unrealistic that they have so many when everyone else seems to have just one or two. But like I said, I really enjoyed the story. :)

Um, one thing: Why would the friends find out they both have superpowers and then just suddenly make up names and a group for themselves. Superheroes don;t DO tha tkind of thing. The people they save usually give them names after they \become ot-shots. Not meant to be a flame but I am a critic and when I odn't like a story I say so. You are a good writer but that just seemed a ittle sudden and strange to me. TAWNYPELT RULES AND ANYONE WHO LIKEs ANYONE ELSE WILL DIE AND BURN!

Excellent story!! The incredibles rock! So do the Team Dynamo! I like that a horse super cool! Great story but if you ask me not long enough I was gettimg so engrossed in it also! Anyways if you have the time please check out my stories k? Anyways I am going right now to read the next story!! Great job!
Cheers,
Lydia

hey 'vi'!
i'd just realized i hadn't reviewed a SINGLE CHAPTER of this story
i'd read it but i hadn't reviewed it!
so i just wanted to say, great story! but ur writing skills sure have developed overtime! ^_^
update aquaguy and the floating beam soon!
~dyu123~

hey, great story, i like it very much.
when r u gonna update? cuz i cant wait. hey, that rhymes!
1 more thing, can u read my stories? dont worry, i promise a lot of humor in it!

SUES EVERYWHERE. I am ashamed to be a teenager when I read this.

kewl chapter! u are awesome!

cute story! =))

well, i liked this story alot!