this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.

Is there going to be more.

This was a great story is there going to be a squeal to it.

I'm so glad you didn't kill Qui-Gon! :D Yay!

Well, I like the changes you've made, as I just said. I just think that Xanatos gave in a little too easily...? And I wish Tahl came in at the end! I wonder what kind of mission Siri got?

MORE PLEASE!

Wondeful story! I loved it! Very awesome everyone is happy! No one dies ! Yay! lol very well written! tis awesome you posted the last three chapters together! it made the reading the story more smoothly lol ! thx! tata

well i like how you let Qui live but had his leg cut of!wTh! lol

Nice chapter! I liked the parts between Darth Maul and Xanatos. They were hilarious, in a strange way.

Tahl's not gonna die right? What about Qui-Gon? I have a feeling he is. Anyway, great chapter! Siri is a lot nicer than I remembered, however, people change over time!

Nice to have you back!

Xanatos is alive? Wow can't wait to see how you're going to use him in this story!

And I'm so glad it was Garen in Obi-Wan's dream! Thank you thank you! I hope they will get to see each other again. I'm sure Obi will need a good friend to face whatever is ahead.

Good job!

Oho, interesting chapter! (even though it may be a filler) Continue updating!

hey, thanx for the reviews and suggestions. i wont be able to update the story for awhile cause i slammed on accident my finger in the car door. its all greyish-black and its very hard to type. gosh, i hurt the same hand again! this is my hand that i need! my left hand cant write or draw, its pretty useless. but i favor my right hand. *smiles* i should stop talkin'. thanxs again for reviews and suggestions!

This is a great story! please update soon!

Very, very nice job so far. This is very interesting and I wonder where you're going to take the story.

And... Who was the other padawan talking to him in the memory sequence? Could it be Garen? *love*

Keep writing!

hehe, I saw the movie on the first day too! It rocked! _ Hope there'll be more Star Wars movies coming along soon... we just gotta wait.

Update!

It's interesting, how you are sticking very close to the original plot and just changing Obi-wan's perspective. Keep up the good work!