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| Navaer 2005-10-09 ch 4,  | abuseYAY! CONTINUE! Please, OMG OMG OMG! PLEASE! LMAO! i'm hyper, thank you! |
| LocoGreggo 2005-06-28 ch 4, | abuseHighly impressed. Keep it up. |
| mellowyellow36 2005-06-05 ch 4, | abuseIl ove the part when the team got all confused about who he was waving at... funny **! ~Kay |
| shadowwind 2005-06-04 ch 4, | abuseFunny how you did the fake out like that. HA HA I can picture Nick and Warrick's face so clearly I feel like rolling in laughter, Great chapter!:) |
| Shadw 2005-06-04 ch 4, | abusegreat job! I loved it! I'd write more, but I've been suffering from dizzy spells and can't focus very well. update soon k? |
| CatherineLouise 2005-06-03 ch 4, | abuseSorry I haven't been keeping up with this story, I guess I missed the alerts! Ah well, I got this one. Good stuff, it's fun. Some spelling mistakes but we all have 'em! I'm enjoying it so far, I look forward to the next update. |
| I.will.be.the.locket.around... 2005-05-03 ch 3, | abuseplz update soon lol m x |
| CatherineLouise 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWell well, lookie here! I've added you to my author alert list so I can find out what happens next! |
| Miss-Andromache 2005-05-03 ch 3, | abuseHey...kudos for writing...and you shouldn't worry about other people; ignore flames because even the best writers get them, people's tastes are all different. Interested to see where this goes, you have a few little spelling and grammatical errors and would probably benefit a lot if you got a beta reader. Again...good for you for writing (and make the negative like water off a ducks back!) |
| Shadw 2005-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThis is rockin! Please update soon! I must know what happens next! |
| p0ptart 2005-05-02 ch 2, | abuseI like it so far. Please, try to ignore comments that only represent a person's tastes and no actual criticism/complementation on the story. People need to learn to accept things that may be different from what they like. Its not like you're forcing them to read it, right? Anyway, keep writing! I like the start. |
| casey 2005-05-02 ch 2, anon. | abuselove it so far! i can't wait to see how this turns out! pls update soon! |
| Catherine Willows 3589 2005-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi i am a complete fan of CSI and I just want to say that adding someone to the cast is really stupid because they work great together and dont want anyone to be added to them because they are a great team and u r just trying to bring the team down and break them apart.So dont write anything like that ever again. |
| pinkforensics 2005-05-02 ch 2, | abuseGood start. There are a few spelling errors in it, but everyone makes mistakes. If you want or need anyone to proofread it, I'd be glad to - just e-mail me. I'm looking forward to next chapter. - Rebecca |
| Shadw 2005-05-02 ch 2, | abuseO! Big twist! Okay, update soon cuz this so rocks! Pease? thankies! |