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alix33
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
"or when you’re devouring Molly’s spaghetti." - What kind of sauce does Molly make with the pasta? There is an awesome one Nigella Lawson gave about two months or so ago in The Observer, the Sunday paper: Basically you melt 50 grams of butter together with a teaspoon of Marmite. It is yummy.
“You’re wrong. I have taken one thing for granted.” She was still looking at her hands. “What would that be?” “You.” He lifted her chin and slowly kissed her. Tonks’ eyes widened in surprise, but quickly closed as she deepened the kiss. In the fireplace, the book turned to ashes." - Yay for the snogging, though Tonks' speech was awesome too.
xLupinxLoverx
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
That was so adorably cute and in character. Good Job!
Owl Emporium
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
Loved it! It was so sweet. :]
Savior of the Truth
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
aww... that was so sweet. =)

And very nicely written, too!
Lavi R
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Wow this is so cute!
I love it! and you kept them both in character! it's prfect!!
Seashadow
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
I really liked this story...it was really sweet, and had a really cute ending. Remus Lupin and Dora Tonks is one of my favorite pairs...they're so good together. I thought you did a lovely job of capturing this moment. Kudos.
the-original-hufflepuff
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
Aww, this is really sweet, and really in-character!
fireblazie
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
You have a beautiful fluffy way of writing. Makes the world seem like a happier place, and makes me all the more jealous of Tonks. xD

Oh - I love the Jane Austen quote on your profile, by the way. :D
The Green Lady
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Aw...I liked it all v. much. V. funny though with the line-: "“Why?” Tonks pleaded. “I’ll have you know I’ve read that book, and it’s horribly depressing rubbish. The werewolf’s family hates him; his girlfriend leaves him; he becomes an alcoholic—and then he kills himself. Oh yeah, I think there’s a part where he gets peed on, too. It’s awful. Why were you reading it?”
OMG! So funny. I started laughing and I woke my roomate up. Good story. :D
the-hoop-earings
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
not as good as some of your other stories but still amazing
HeidiBug731
2006-05-18 . chapter 1
Aw, CUTE!
Cherenmay
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
absolutely adorable! these two are one of my favorite couples, though i cannot even begin to fathom why. the chemistry between them in this fic is so sweet and obvious, it's as though they're both teenagers again. marvelous work!
jwoods471
2006-02-03 . chapter 1
Great story.
Bardlover
2006-02-02 . chapter 1
So sweet...: D
Bratanimus
2006-01-24 . chapter 1
Very sweet! *sigh* :D
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