|Reviews for Mutants Among Us|
| Guest 5/9/13 . chapter 5
just so you know Shockwave has already been taken by someone in the x-men universe if I remember correctly. I don't mind the name for Kim at all, but I'm sure you have probably already gotten hell for it.
| Dsman 9/5/11 . chapter 1
how is it brick knows thier mutents when they did not even know they were mutants they would have noticed that before don't you think so
| C.J.Robbins 7/26/08 . chapter 1
Dude (or dudett)! You make some seriously awesome stories, you know. I've already read your Ghost Rider story. Awseome!
| donalddeutsch 2/22/08 . chapter 1
Ok I'm used to reading X-Men/Harry Potter crossovers, and this is the first one I've read crossed over with KP, good job so far, I am looking forward to reading the rest of it.
| CoolKat Avalon 2/27/07 . chapter 15
Sorry to write this now when you've been finished with this story but I only recently found it. I can't remember the chapter but you say in one of them that Wade is an agoraphobic yet in the Kim Possible episode involving Team Impossible he does. I also thought it would have made sence to pair Tara up with Rogue. If they both have similar powers then they should be able to touch each other no problem. However I can understand that not everyone is comfortable with same sex relationships but I think at the very least they should be really good friends as they will understand each other really well
| beeftony 12/12/06 . chapter 1
This one had me jumping up and down like an 11 year old girl who just heard Hillary Duff was in town when I figured out the title. I'm a huge fan of the X-Men, and have been for many years. I do, however, have some complaints:
First of all, we never hear from Wade, which is surprising, seeing as he's a mutant as well.
Brick seems to know more than anyone else about who is and is not a mutant, which is a surprise, seeing that he's normally dumb as a post. I'm not complaining about his newly found intelligence, but where exactly did he get this information? This could be clarified.
Kim, Ron, Bonnie and Monique were all juniors the night of the prom
that this story makes reference to. Brick was the only Senior. Did the other four graduate early? Again, this could be clarified.
Kim and Ron let go of their family ties a bit too easily. Bonnie I can understand, and Brick and Monique's families I don't know very well, but Kim and Ron don't seem to give it so much as a passing thought outside of the second chapter, which just unnerves me. Kim and Ron's families have stuck with them through thick and thin, and their sudden absence is noticeable to the point that they just come across as heartless. "So, Kimmie, you're a mutant? Good luck with that. We'll be off somewhere abandoning you." This seems to be their attitude, and it just doesn't work right. Kim and Ron could at least feel homesick, but they don't. This is my biggest gripe about the story, one that I feel could have been improved. Ah well, maybe the prequel Doug has planned (and has yet to write) will shed some light on this.
Minor gripes aside, this is a fine story.
| Raawr.x 10/6/06 . chapter 3
I like it
| RomyGirl123 8/20/06 . chapter 1
Was Monique's power mentioned in this chapter, because if it was I missed it.
| dr-fanmai-lover 7/18/06 . chapter 14
bervo yah iam aill-raigth-waith x-man
howcome-nobody eaver tryed k.p waith the-uni-power/captin-unive
| dr-fanmai-lover 7/15/06 . chapter 15
bervo-bervo howabout wade as-ptaer camptron
eaver kaime-waith captin-univrse
| Sailor GaOn Donut 6/9/06 . chapter 15
eheh, I reviewed for the other one, but forgot to review for this. anyway... very good!
| shadow hunter 01 11/13/05 . chapter 3
this is really good!
| Orphan 8/11/05 . chapter 15
Can't wait to read the next installment. This story is very well written, and i love kims power. Wouldn't she be able to communicate with bats and other animals that use sonic to communicate? I think that would come to kim as a shock, being able to understand certain animals.
I love the ending by the way, classic. Chess game.
PS. Cannonball is the perfect match for bonnie.
| Forceuser3 the Jedi Master 7/26/05 . chapter 15
e-mail me if i'm right your waiting for x-men legend 2 age of apocalypse to come out yes
| Dillymac 6/22/05 . chapter 15
I realy liked this story. But you could have added the others in a little more. (Go Logan)