I've read this story about a month ago (I was sort of lazy to review). Anyway, fell in love with this story! Nakago and Soi as kids is probably a very smart way to portray their feelings (or future feelings for that matter) to each other. It's nice to see Nakago as someone who still has feelings, and Soi who hasn't lost her innocence yet. This is a very unique story, and I love it so much!

You know, I saved this fic in my PC a long time ago, but didn't review (what with my notorious laziness when it comes to reviewing -_-). But then I found out it's yours, so what better way to reward a reviewer than to pay in kind, right? ;p

Anyways, I think you did really good with this fic. Nakago and Soi as kids are pretty much in character here, which is hard to do with Nakago being stoic and all, even probably as a kid. All in all, fantastic English, it's not obvious that it's not your mother tongue and I better stop before I write another paragraph =^_^= Keep on writing! Ja.

I'm glad you reviewed and told me about this. I truly do adore their relationship in the show...I'm a fan of alternate pairings in the fanfiction world, but I seem to like the dark couples in the cannon universe. Nakago and Soi have one of the most tragic relationships I've ever seen. It broke my heart how much she loved him and how he couldn't reciprocate until she was dead. I think he loved her but he had such a messed up past he wanted her to move on and not be cursed by him. He didnt seem to count on her being as stubborn as him!

The voice you wrote in is odd though...its like a first person in Nakago...or a second person...which I've never read that tense before. Good luck with this and I'll keep reading.

I will pretend that I understood what was going on long enough to tell you that this was superbly written and ten kinds of goodstuff.

Jajajajajaja~ >D

E! Aww, that's so cute! ^_^

Hi Ruby-sama! ^_^
Tenho duas coisas pra falar de sua fic, com o novo casal, novo anime/mangá... Primeiro, está muito Kawaii! Vc é sem dúvida uma escritora muito talentosa, que consegue abordar com sentimentos e delicadeza os mais complexos sentimentos. Vc sabe, eu adoro Nakago,e ele e a Soi formam um casal muito fofo! E acredito que vc é a pessoa certa pra escrever sobre eles... ^_^
Segundo... Pque vc não escreveu em português... u.u... Levei quase todo horário do almoço pra conseguir terminar de ler sua fic... u.u...
^_^ Mas, olha, não é bajulação naum, sua fic está um primor, de verdade, e espero que vc escreva mais e mais fics, seja sess/kik ou qualquer outro universos anime/mangá que faça sua imaginação e talento criarem essas coisas lindas que só vc consegue escreve, e como fã agradeço de montão!
E... Er... Kis?... o.o... Na próxima?... ^_~
Sucesso nessa sua nova empreitada... E abaixo o marasmo criativo! Ele não tá com nada... hehehe...
Tudo de bom!
Bjus
Pri-sama.

Are you sure your not a REAL writer?

This is excellent. I mean, way better than your Kikyou and Sesshomaru, what happened to you? Trained in the mountains to make your writing stlye way ahead of you now? lol, this is great. I'm glad I have you on my Author Alert list!

By the way... I always get confused with Naraku and Nakago. I wonder why?

Read ya soon!!

Tenshi K.

Hey, W00beh!! It's me Tamashii! (I'm using my bro's pen name! XD) I loved this!! You have to update this ASAP!! And another thing! AW, so Kawaii!! I loved the way you made Soi-sama and Nakago-sama so chibi-like!! Yeah! Anyhow, I loved this 100% so keep it up!! -^_^x- I'm going to add this in my "fav. stories" list thingy! Lol!! XD I'll see ya k? Ja!! ^-^ :3~

One thousand pies for this chibified feat! And m00fins, too!

Second-Person effect: A+;
Writing Style: A++;
Coherence: A+;
Kyutness: Do I really have to list all those "+"s? It would consider to be spam after the hundredth one, anyway. :P

Soi-sama... talking in third person... *SHA-KWEEL* And thanks to you, I'm now gonna dream about mini-Soi and Naka chibi demons jumping up and down around my bed tonight--but hey, who said that was a bad thing? :3 As for Naka-chan himself, I'm beginning to see clearer of why you infatuate with him so. *waves Nakago & Soi banners* Cute chibi, redhead of a kiddie + Semi-stoic youngster = MORE SHA-KWEEING!

With many pocky,
Do I seriously have to leave a signature with that kind of diction? xD

Very well written story; I really got into it. I like your style. I got a bit confused in the beginning, couldn't really tell whether the main character was male or female until a few paragraphs down. Still, I really enjoyed reading this. Update as soon as you can, I'm putting this to my favorite's list.

Thanks for reviewing my fics. I'm so glad that someone appreciated my work. But unfortunately Nakago and Soi fics are very rare.

As to your fic, it's very good. Other writers cannot fully express the emotions when the fanfic is not one-shot and those include me. Continue it and I'm sure other fans of Nakago and Soi will be glad.