That ending was really unexpected D:

Great story! I love it :D

That was so tragic! And yet wonderfully written. Enjoyed reading it. ^_^

OMG. So tragic. Not what I was expecting. Beautiful. Truly beautiful.

:O

No! That was beautifully tragic.

Amazingly descriptive. Very sad...

Really no words to describe how wonderful this fanfic was! :)

-BDR

gorgeously descriptive and beautifully emotive. an amazing read, i absolutely LOVED. i was close to tears, so very powerful...

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

That was beautiful... I dont really know what to say other than that. It was so powerful, so sad, it was lovely really. I'm adding it to my favorites, I'll be reading this quite a few times I think. Thank you for writing that.

dat is so depressing! but i loved it, it's so sad, so in the end did roy die?

Gory, sad, and perfect. Very, very heartrending.

...when the summary said that she wasn't too late...to say the lesat, surprise ending.

Captivating, very well done. Gave me that feeling in the pit of my stomach, the one you get when the emotion tugs right at you. ::nod:: Great job!

"Now Roy just noticed they were dead."

I love how you wrote that. The way his thoughts are brought out, thinking she was going to say something to him, but she got shot and was killed.

Awesome. 10/10

Dude, that was awsome...sept for when she spat out blood (ewwness...and when she died) excellent description and all that good stuff. ^^ *claps and cries* T_T

This was si well written! I didn't see it coming. It was just so beautiful, romantic and I could litteraly feel the heat, the love, the passion...and then the sadness...Bravo! Write more, but please don't kill anyone anymore!

roy didn't die in yhe series. good job though.

WAH!

RIZA DIES!!

BUT LOVE DA WAY YOU DESRIBED IT!!
YEAH!

'PLEASE, KEEP WRITING!'